Bruh_mann

I completely and utterly retract my statement. this shit is ass, I was gravitated towards this fanfiction because of the amazing concept and maybe the hopium got in my eyes but I now realized how absolutely ass this is. the character is very clearly a Mary sue. you gave him almost no actual development as he barely struggles to do anything. immediately learning RCT? yeah I'm out. His aunt is Yuki? how convenient, is he going to learn domain expansion and maximum output before even facing his first enemy? You could've used RCT as a whole 20 chapter arc BUT NoOOOoo the MC HAS to be op that's the tag after all? you clearly misunderstood what the op protag tag is for. making the MC op isn't only for the power but how he and the world interacts with the power. how his relationships build with his blindingly strong powers getting in the way. How he lives his everyday life knowing he could destroy everything around him, and how his enemies get around his strength and how they exploit his weaknesses yet at every single turn, you simply made the MC strong only for the sake of strength. this story is empty. completely vacant the only thing that makes this somewhat intriguing is the concept I tried being as constructive with this criticism but it's just hard to criticise when the problems are the literal foundation of the story itself