I am Overhaul in Jujutsu Kaisen World

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Bruh_mann

Honestly this FanFic is pretty decent, it's well written and I haven't noticed any grammatical errors. my only issue is the fact that's it's stuck in the 3rd person, you never get to hear the MC's thought or anyone's for that matter, Which creates a disconnect with the story. Not to mention the fact that the author just boosted Overhaul with no explanation. althought I haven't seen mha in a while Overhaul's quirk is strong mainly because Overhaul has some of the best control in the series yet somehow the mc gains control that is beyond what overhaul is capable with barely any training. also the writing is dry... like REALLY dry I haven't felt a tinge of emotion coming from any of the characters that is just "he felt confusion" Not a bad read tho

LV 1

Fran_0178

This isn't Overhaul's power, it's an amped-up version on steroids and without the limitations that simply throws all the bets out and makes everything extremely boring and predictable. The character is ridiculously powerful, he can basically do the same thing as Suguru and Mahito, only easier, better and without the consequences, and that's just two aspect of his power. What he does should normally be possible only with the domain expansion technique.

LV 13

MGSR_Sam

story is bland, and there is not much emotion. needlessly buffed overhaul quirk. mc is mary sue every day chinese mc, no thoughts, head empty, strolling around the story. mc creates a chimera and how he did it explained afterward with no details, nothing but a patchwork for plot holes.

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Khma_Jishan

Bro its amazing...please dont drop this...I have a suggestion if you dont mind its just instead of 2 short chapters every day why dont you combine it to 1 chapter and release it....But yeah the story is kinda great...Please keep going

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Mubashir_Jaleel_4501

bro it's so good ,Writing and story are both amazing i hope you will keep writing

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AgniFaradel

As I have seen in other comments, it is a waste of time to explain why the rating. The characters are bad, the plot is meh, the development is meh, the writing quality is average, as is the story.

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Cameron_Henderson_0639

my biggest problem is the chapter lengths are incredibly short

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Bomberman

i think this has potential to hit the top of the charts easily

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rare_swordsman_54

story is a good read .....it would have been bland if the tag would be weak to strong or strong to stronger but it's overpowered fic so not much of a charector development is expected....and overhaul abilities are overpowered on its own so it may seem excessive to manipulate souls but i am keeping my judgement to myself untill i see the development of story in that direction.

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LENX

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Manas_Patil_8343

interesting......................................................................................................................................................

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AlexandreAugusto

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PEPE_mujica

La historia es muy buena y me está enganchando muchísimo sufro mucho con el hecho que solo suba dos capítulos al día pero supongo que es lo que hay

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I_Love_Hina

I think this is pretty good but some training arcs should be less than 1-2

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Elemise

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