her eyes
Mrs Carris had a playful smile in his eyes, "I do not think so, I think he is pretty interesting."
The Elusive Book Keeper
LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
He may be good with the spear, but may be lacking with the sword [img=thinking]
Zhang Fengxi almost exploded in anger.
Dance Of The Dragons
LGBT+ · Lu_Shui
The thought of "wanting to be friends" seems pretty unrealistic, going against her character setting...
bouquet not banquet
Holding onto the doorknob, she opened it "Happy birthday to y-" Ariel stopped in her tracks, the banquet of flowers she held in her other hand fell to the ground. She just had the biggest shock of her life.
OWNED BY AN ALPHA
Fantasy · Lil_Amore
Love this book tremendously so far. The main character is charming and plays cunningly with his smooth facade. The developing romance is endearing and the introduction in this magical world is well-developed. Definitely one of the gems in Webnovel!
The story definitely has potential, but a proofreader is truly recommended. Right now it is a hassle to try reading this piece.
"Why are you wandering..." not the other way around
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Villain x Villain
LGBT+ · Black_Queen666
"does" singular-> plural "do/ don't"
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Villain x Villain
LGBT+ · Black_Queen666
add "s" to the singular use of verbs like "who respects"
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Villain x Villain
LGBT+ · Black_Queen666
it complimented
He had the most distinctive eye color that one could not forget. The first time I travelled to Egypt I knew I would remember the man by his smile alone, he had the gentlest color of red lips with the most perfect teeth I had ever seen. It complicated his long jaw and high cheek bones.
The Egyptian Goddess
LGBT+ · Matli_Unicorn