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I'm confused is this a we question or a rhetorical one?
ch 25 Chapter 25: Heroes Vs Villains
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Through his nozzle? No.
ch 24 Chapter 24: Transparency to the Rescue!
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How, if you give me an example from the chapter I can explain it
ch 23 Chapter 23: Hysteria at 12
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Yeah Sure!
ch 16 Chapter 15: Lookalike
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He's referring to the last chapters of Tokyo Ghoul, not Re where Kaneki "died" by Arimia because he was a "ghoul."
If even that guy, someone who was as bright as the sun and who attracted various people to help him, failed to control the monster, then what chance did he have?
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Pretty sure it means both as on the Tokyo Ghoul wiki it says Red Child
Agreeable; however, the "Worseness" of your house and the street is subjective, for someone who's seen the grass on both sides, it's up to them based on "their" experiences to decide which is worse and to choose their poison. Essentially, I believe your claims come down to them being valid, while also not understanding that the choice of which is worse, the decision to say that living with their abusive parent isn't worth it and that they should go out into the real world, report to the authorities that he believes are corrupt, and fend for themselves, is ultimately his, and with his previous experiences, which I show and talk about in future chapters, he decides not to. So while I understand and can even partially agree with your claims of his decision being unreasonable, odd, and confusing, the perspective changes when you look through Ken, the protagonist's, eyes. Now I can agree that I may not have done the best job delaying such information about his past life for future chapters, but I can assure you that it is there, and that I have my reasons for doing so. In Ken's case, as I explore in the story, his decision to stay with his abusive parent is influenced by various factors, including past trauma and the perceived trade-off between stability (albeit in an abusive environment) and the feelings one who's never felt before may gain. It's important to acknowledge that the concept of "worse" is relative and deeply personal, shaped by one's unique life experiences and perspective. Again, thank you for taking the time to comment and for the thought you've put into your responses so far, and I invite you to continue forward. [[P.S. I will say that such a conflict between staying with his father and leaving will be a constant theme that is properly explored and talked about through the book.]
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Pilot
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I'm unsure what you mean by 'dependent.' He goes back to his abusive parent because, as I briefly showed in the beginning, he hasn't lived a good life in his previous one. In future chapters, I will show that *Skip for Spoilers* he lived an even worse life than the one he's in now. To address your other comment about how 'being so submissive just to get food and shelter is illogical,' not to be rude, but the price of 'just food and shelter' is subjective, and such a take could be considered privileged depending on the person. To someone who's lived a majority of his life on the streets, has had to fend for such things completely by himself, and understands the struggles of such a life, getting such things for 'free,' practically, is a very good deal. So, to him, it's not 'illogical.' Lastly, he's twelve—a twelve-year-old in a world filled with superpowered humans. In a completely foreign world, he hasn't quite understood yet, it's reasonable for him to choose to stay with his abusive dad at least until he understands the world better and amasses more strength. As I've mentioned already, he doesn't live in the most peachy part of Musutafu, meaning, from what he knows, going to the authorities won't always help. I hope this addresses and fully answers your question. If you have any more concerns, please feel free to comment again.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Pilot
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How so?
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Pilot
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No he's not a sidekick.
ch 26 Chapter 26: Slice of Life
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I forty-second that
In the springtime, in his house, Kirishima was putting on his new uniform. Once done, he sorted his hair and hardened it like he planned, with two horns protruding and the rest tied in a ponytail.
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Money
The plumper man's eyes did a quick sweep around the house, clean, save for the bottles of beer, lacking the usual pants, lipstick, and overall telltale signs of a woman having been here.
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No.
Kinda?
'Aww Why? You know you want, besides, what has this trash done to deserve your compassion?
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Understandable, your confusion makes sense, however I kinda Need OC's to make a story, and if you read on their interactions, personality, and them as a character would be clearly explained. If your issue is no MHA characters when rest assure they will appear but the OC's WILL be a prominent thing in the book.
ch 11 Chapter 11: Misfits Inaguration
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Understandable, however looking at it from my POV I have a character I need to put into the world and develop him with his own experiences and interactions, it is inevitable that I will need OC's to develop him since the MHA cast is only so big. I will say that in the coming chapters 20's and forward after this over reaching arc ends there will be wayyy more MHA characters but yeah that's why I have as many OC's as I do.
ch 18 Chapter 17: Yoshimura's Debut
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This should be refreshing, someone using OFA with more thought process than just 'SMASH' in their mind.
'No don't punch, I just need to save Bakugo. Just hold him and use the one second to drag the boy out of the mud. That's it. Yes, that should do it,' he quickly made a plan of action and went for the monster.
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Let us *Play* a little bit.
Sure, but to make such an amount in one week or two, to someone who's never had to spend more than say 2,000 in one sitting is quite the sum.
'Everyone could get 1 million.'
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Understandable, these are the thoughts of Ken who hasn't read book two but yes you are correct this person is not Arima's level, simply incredibly strong. Ken has nobody to compare his strength with thus he mistakenly uses an assumption of him being a fully powered ghoul when comparing strengths even though he is just a child ghoul right now.
'This is something only those at the very top could do. Does this mean this man is at the level of Arima?'
MHA: One Eye'd King
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