Great writing and first 9 chapters really exciting
The beginning is a bit slow but it picks up on pace and really makes you look forward to reading more
1+
Nice
House Sigil: The Nemean Lion
TV · Ninja_King_3834
Cant see the pic
[Current Indra Image (in Discord)]
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
Amazing as always
Very good.
Of course your feeble mind cant comprehend the actions of a primarch
Glancing down, Atlas noticed his nakedness exposed to the world. Without much thought, he ripped the sturdy hide from the deceased beast as one would remove a sock. Then, just as easily, he draped a section of the hide from the largest creature around his waist, fashioning a makeshift garment to preserve his modesty.
Video Games · NOSAMPLE_NOSAMPLE
This is really good, especially in the later stages
Great subtle show of the emperor slowly revealing his powers he had hidden so deeply
A.N: I already miss combat/plots/scheeming chapters, but chapters like these are necessary too, I'll try my best ot pump them out quickly but i swear these are somehow much harder to write.
The Eternal Emperor
Movies · Phantom17