The Primarch of Liberty

The problem of this story is that the author doesn't know the source material. He doesn't know that there was no inquisition in the 30 millennium. That's not all but the most glaring one. Basically, he knows a bit about Warhammer 40k and tries to write a story about 30k without knowing that 30k pre heresy and 40k are vastly different.

LV 11

_VOIDLESS_

More Warhammer is always appreciated. Now how in sweet baby liberty are you gonna pull this off

LV 1

IamKingOfFreedom

America in warhammer 30k bruh....America in warhammer 30k bruh....America in warhammer 30k bruh...America in warhammer 30k bruh....America in warhammer 30k bruh...America in warhammer 30k bruh....America in warhammer 30k bruh......

LV 2

Killjoy4Life

Overall not a bad fanfic for how it is written but the number of libertys it takes borders between gary sue and shameless how right everything goes for the mc, but for all this it is still well written I just wouldn't recommend it to anyone that cares about natural development or consistency with the canon version. I am not going to keep reading but I don't regret reading the first 18 chapter this just is not my cup of tea.

LV 4

LesendeTaube

Freedom and democracy are strong in this one. Just please don‘t drop it, I‘m begging you.

LV 13

Caedus_Aldric

Asmodai!" "INTERROGATE?!" "Our assumptions are confirmed!" "WHAT" "He has written a suspicious book!" "BOOK" "He's in cahoots with the Fallen!" "FALLEN" "Make him repent!" "Repeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennnnnttttttt

LV 4

DaoistDxMgPm

you had me at liberty. god speed Author 🫡

LV 4

TheDarkDark

A Gary Sue done right, while others may dislike this fanfiction for it's obvious power scaling and almost lack of struggle, understand that if you look at this fanfiction as an extension of the canon then you've come to the wrong place. This fanfic is not the dark grim future of 40k, but a humourous take on what 30k can entail. It doesn't follow the typical themes of tragedy and horror. It has it's moment and if you're willing to see it through take a chance to read it. It can be slightly awkward at times but It's 4.8/5 in my book.

LV 14

roastedchicken

I have to say, this is a gem. For the emperor 🙌

LV 4

TheUniqueOne

the best Warhammer fanfic I've read so far

LV 4

DanzoSlayer

This is not the Warhammer 40000 we wanted but we actually wanted. Plenty of humour and war crimes

LV 4

DarkCustodes

Author, this is warhammer 40k fanfic peak 🔥💯

LV 3

L0wkey

Overall it's a good story One of the flaws is that the author doesn't know the warhammer lore that well so author sometimes makes a mistake the biggest one is probably inquisition existing in 30k I haven't seen any major plotholes The first 9 chapters were annoying and boring to read but after that it got better The story is funny and some of it moments made me genuinely laugh I 'm giving it 5 stars because more warhammer content is always good and it's a high quality for a warhammer fic

LV 14

Mozuto

Yeah, I know it's not the most accurate towards the Warhammer lore but this is good, I like it, good job author, though you just need 30 more years to fully learn about Warhammer lore

LV 1

Raja_Sihir

All the awesome characters like the emperor were sent to sit on the golden toilet, and the others couldn't be cooler. This is no joke. People like the emperor are the ones who hold the template of the protagonist. In terms of power and strength, the psychic power is so strong that it can extinguish the stars, and the four gods have to work together to deal with him. In terms of strategy, hang and beat all kinds of aliens, blast all warlords, and complete the great cause of unification. In terms of ideology, he has been a magician, worked on socialism, and later personally carried out the God-killing movement. In terms of achievements, unifying mankind, establishing the Astropaths, and laying the foundation of the empire for thousands of years, it was only a little bit short of completing the ultimate concept of the ascension of the whole people. To be honest, Guilliman has never seen such a powerful protagonist in that game.

LV 2

American_Warhammer

this shit had me crying no cap you don't see stories this good nowadays

LV 4

the_SCP_Foundation

All I have to say is wow, just wow, I think this in my top 5 stories, maybe top 3, and I’ve read thousands, AND I MEAN THOUSANDS, of books, and this one takes the cake, I very, VERY rarely see an OC insert so good, along with an author who actually gives a shit about the lore? AMAZING, S+++ tier book, simply fantastic

LV 4

CurseHandSr

fist I world like to say this is not a masterpiece because let's be real nothing is but I got to say Shiro-Cuz I am really impressed at what you have made among heaps of straight gar-boge I found something readable is at least what I thought at first bust the further i red, the more you carves out these characters I found myself transfixed by the story I would go in depth but you should just give a solid 50 you will love it the only thing I'm disappointed in is there are no ogren tin buddies.