Give me my coins back
Good story. I just hope we're not paying for the text at the end of every chapter
Back off on repeating his full system stats so much. If you need to show an increase in his system points, show that but not the whole thing.
Way too much describing everything.
Please stop repeating chapters at the start of every new chapter. Adds up after awhile
Please quit repeating the ending paragraph of every chapter.
I really enjoy the story, but I also really hope it gets the genders straight going forward.
For sure. He, She or It. Please pick one and stay with it.
Chapter 8 Tyrant Shadow
I Truly Am The Villian
Eastern · The history of love is full of regrets.
This is the second time I've started reading this. The first time, it went into Hiatus. Hope this isn't going to be a repeat of that. Please either continue the story or drop completely so we don't waste our coins and time.
Aren't his arrows formed from aether?
As the room settled into silence, Ethan retrieved his spent arrows.
The Tower's Trial: Mythical-Grade Awakening [Soulweaver]
Fantasy · Diyen_Pi