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Silas, as a normal hot-blooded youth with big dreams and huge ambition, wanted to see the world, experience what it has to offer while living his dream life.
But when has life ever gone according to plan? when has it ever been fair to anyone? Silas was hit with a reality check after graduating, if school was hard, society is harder.
For two years he worked but nothing seems to be working out. He gave up on his dreams and ambition and his determination waned.
After a long day at work one day, he looked up at the ceiling and made a wish, a wish he never knew will come true and change his life forever.
He got a system, one that seems to be an all-rounder and it has his dream feature.
[Ding!]
[You spent $1199. You received 10x rebate of expenses made. You earned $11,990. The money has been sent to host bank account]
"My dream life is no longer out of reach!"
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This is my first book and English is not my main, I will apologize for any possible error.
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Disclaimer: 'Getting A System In A Modern World' is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
This book may reference real companies and organizations, but these references are for narrative purposes only and are not intended to depict actual conduct or involvement of these entities. The use of these names and references is not meant to harm, defame, or discredit these companies or organizations.
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Viết đánh giáI have to say it is a gem. A true gem i have read 45+ ch so far & it really good. i just hope mc can keep evolove in most perfect way.. author please continue this novel you have huge potential...
Quite a pleasant read so far, despite the occasional rough spots in the gramar and spelling. They are not so jarring that they break me out of my focus on the story. I am enjoying the way in which the MC is being developed, and his evolving personality is fleshed out. I'm hoping to see it done the secondary characters that are prominent enough to deserve it. So, a hearty 'Good Job' to the author and your reward is to keep working hard to develop and keep improving the story. 😉
I love the concept of the story and the characters themselves. There are a few very minor spelling errors but significantly better than most stories on the platform. My main concern is that his stat sheet is repeated almost every single chapter, and considering that nothing changes really in the later chapters (50-75ish, which is latest released at this time), other than the number of lottery tickets, it would really help with immersion to just show the parts of the status that actually changed. There have even been chapters with the entire long status listed more than once in the chapter, leaving significantly less of the chapter to be the actual story and it feeling a bit like a cash grab tbh. Other than that, I just hope the author sticks with the story, as it does have great potential and has been a very enjoyable read.
21 chapters in and the stroyline so far ? spectacular i love where the story is going.silas character is just perfect and with the help of the system he will definitely conquer all😎keep up the good work author and thank you for the amazing chapters 🔥
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Like who gives their own book a five-star review. I didn't want to do this but I had no choice. I'm writing this review for readers who have questions. Please ask your questions below. This is my first book and I hope not to disappoint. Thanks for reafding 💙