Webnovel Author: BigBoyJenkins - Novel Collection

I’ll still read the book until it get boring or cant afford to.

Hey author if i could i would love to give you a piece of advice. Please dont forget the mc was once from earth. Dont let him fall into all the stupid scenarios that a lot of mc’s finding themselves in please. Maybe build up a force of his own? Strengthen his family with techniques, as few face slapping incidents as possible with young masters, instead of attacking the young master then the father then the grandfather and so on. Why not attack the grandfather and father? I understand the mc is still young and working through his memories, but dont let him make childish mistakes please. Or do, i dont care, i just wanted to give my perspective .

I hope the basilisk king is usefull and part of the story. I know the story is just starting, but i would really like for the basilisk king to be more important than blackstar, tolly , or any of the beats ryu had on him. I would also love to see the more of the basilisk pov and character grow and overall growth of the character.

Hey author just wanted to give you some advice and keep writing, a lot of people linke to binge read so most people wont give a novel a try until there is a decent amount of chapter( usually 100-150, before starting), but i really like the concept of this novel and would like for you to continue writing it.

Hey author, i know you have a webtoon for your wizards book, is that still going to continue ?

I would love for more characters to be fleshed out. I dont need hundreds of chapter per person. But learning more or seeing characters bond would be great. I understand it the first volume so your setting things up, and not everyone need to be included, but having pov’s from other characters and even enemies is great, it allows us to see things from a enemies or allies perspective. Also this last part is more or less my preference , but please make the mc ambitious . Every mc wants to be strong , or protect people which is nice and all, but havibg a character who wants to become a god, want to rule, wants to lead, for reasons other than protecting or morals, would feel mych more human( again the whole ambitious mc is all personal preference )

Who is micheal godsoul again? Like was he mentioned earlier in the story?

From what i can telll, this sounds pretty logical, i will say tho, try not to drag this arc for hundreds and hundreds of chapters. If you can me it good awesome , but so far the story makes sense and connects well. But i would love to see if the MC could take control of the world will instead of the demon will, but again if you make the story good then i dont really care😂. Just keep uploading

Hey author keep up the chapters. From the first 20 chapter alone, i can tell that if done right that novel will do well. Don’t get disheartened about low views for the start though. Lots of readers like to binge read

Idk who vale is? Mix up in mc names im guessing?

Watch aina breakthrough to creation state after this battle😂

Ill give it the only advice i got for you. Keep uploading . A lot of readers like to let the chapters pile up so they can read a lot. So you just gotta keep uploading and eventually people will start reading

Honestly i enjoyed these chapters. Your not making it super difficult to understand which makes it great

Hey author, all i wanna say is keep up the good work. The grammar and writing of your book is already amazing. I think what you need most is just more chapters. I know people love to binge read, so eventually people will start reading when your chapters start to climb up