Webnovel Author: Iosif_72 - Fanfic&Novel Collection

I don't know if I understood you correctly but I am going to answer what I understood you asked me. You have told me that I could have ordered someone else to wash it but that cannot be since of the almost 30 followers they are all men, perhaps if I asked the hotel a woman could have washed it. But doing that has several things that I don't like, I needed a scene for their relationship to improve quickly and for her to get used to being a slave. (maybe if I make them wash each other better) So giving him a name + giving him a shower improves the relationship a lot. And I have a question, do you prefer that the slave become his right hand and run an intelligence organization or do you prefer that she become more like a "head maid" of Xue Sha and is *SPOILER* a descendant of some emperor? of Xing Luo from 100 years ago for example. Maybe I'll end up mixing them, if you have any idea what background to put I would love for you to tell me, I don't know why my ideas seem too cliché to me. I almost forgot, have I answered your question? because my English is quite bad and having to use a translator I don't know exactly what you're asking.

I'm sorry, it's just that at the beginning the novel was going to have another plot so it stayed that way, but don't worry, just pass that at the beginning.

Thank you very much for your comment, the \ error has now been fixed. That happens when I copy the text from one side and paste it here, sometimes those things come out. I would love to let me know if you find any errors.

Sorry for what I'm going to say but, you don't have reading comprehension or what! If you read when the Pope gives Su Yuntao a ring, one with a bow martial spirit shoots 2 arrows, one arrow was for those in the forest to bring him the beast that Su Yuntao needed, the other is the one that arrived at the house of the village chief. The ability of a ring (right now I don't remember what ring it was) of that person is that it can "send an arrow through space." I guess now you understand, I guess when you saw five chapters of Su Yuntao you skipped them so this is what happens. Thank you for your comment, I hope you like my novel.

I don't know why you say that because I never said that Su Yuntao is the protagonist. If you had read Douluo Dalu you would know who he is. If you continue reading you will understand a little better why that is. Maybe you have been confused because I have written 5 chapters of a secondary character. But maybe I have included too much of a secondary character but there are several things that I needed to include and I can't put them in a normal chapter, so that's how those chapters were born, for example where x city is and how long it takes to get from x to y. The AI ​​thing, I don't use it to create the chapter, I use it as if it were an editor, that is, I give it a draft and the AI ​​improves it and tells me you have x errors, change it or this thing doesn't match the other one. So there is no error, what there may be error is that when translating it into English things change and some things that sound good in Spanish in English look bad.

My apologies if you find any errors in this chapter, as I experienced insomnia last night and woke up very late. I only had about 40 minutes to write it, whereas I typically have 3 to 4 hours. Additionally, for those who dislike what might be considered "filler" chapters, I would like to inform you that in the next chapter, if possible, I will include a fight scene.

Mis disculpas si encuentran errores en este capítulo, ya que anoche experimenté insomnio y me desperté muy tarde. Solo pude dedicar unos 40 minutos a escribirlo, cuando normalmente dispongo de 3 a 4 horas. Además, para aquellos a quienes no les gustan los capítulos que podrían considerarse "de relleno", les adelanto que en el próximo capítulo, si es posible, incluiré una escena de pelea.

If you remember a few chapters ago, the grandfather told him to approach the prince, and the surname of all the kings and emperor of the Tiandou Empire is Xue Therefore, although it seems annoying to say so, they have to become friends no matter what. On Xue Feng's part, what happens is that they have also told him to approach Xue Sha, but I understand that it seems that there has been a cut, but I didn't want to make a chapter about how they order the prince to approach the MC but Maybe I should have mentioned it so it doesn't seem so rushed.

what do you mean with that? Are you talking about them coming too close too soon?

You may have skipped it or I forgot to put it in, it is assumed that in chapter 10 of Raimundo's letter at the end of the chapter it says that the twins are going to be servants of Alfonso and Sancha

The rank of Count is not what you imagine, he should be called viscount but what I am going to do is I am going to divide the nobles into 2, which are those who have land and those who do not, by those who do not have land I mean that It is not his but they are more something similar to a mayor for x years and the owner in this case Raimundo can take away the lands that he manages whenever he wants but the others who have land are the vassals with whom he has pacts... The ranges will be: With land:-knight,-baron,-count. Landless:-knight,-baron,-viscount. I'm going to give you a spoiler: someone's children do not have to be theirs, they may be someone else's illegitimate children. About the maids' clothes, if you refer to chapter 21 it says: The twins, having woken up with the crowing of the roosters, had already showered and dressed in their new maids' clothes. This is referring to the clothes they are given to wear in the castle, when they arrived they dressed "well", maybe I missed explaining that they were given maids' clothes? And the fact that they are 3 years old, think of them as a child of 5-6 years old now or even older, and the fact that they speak formally is because they have been learning etiquette for at least 6 months. Do you have more questions?

Hi, thanks for the comment. Since you put it in Portuguese I had to use the translator, but when I translated it I still don't understand what you mean. 1-When did I say that when a nobleman becomes a servant of another nobleman he stops being noble? 2-I don't understand the next part of your comment. 3-Could you tell me what inconsistencies there are in the text? Thank you.