More like Geneva suggestion!
Valorian's lips curled into a grin. "Perfect. Let's remind these xenos why human rights are for humans. Sovereign, open a channel to all ships."
The Primarch of Liberty
Anime & Comics · Shiro_Kusanagi_69
Don’t redo there’s plenty of good material to build on, you still haven’t shown us the changes from the people’s POV of all the things homelander is trying to implement. What does the world look like to those under homelander and those against him now that he has established himself and has an organization that can make people into sups at his command. Changing view points and trying to look at your story from a different perspective is a good way of getting inspiration on ways to develop a story. (And you write good so don’t start from scratch )
Using something inconspicuous like whistling to send a signal to the brain through the ears, I imagine it to have a similar effect to mind control or thought paralysis. Not turning the target into a puppet but more of overloading the senses with information to cause a metal blu screen to occur. The longer he whistles, the longer you’re stunned. Another idea was just fooling the brain into thinking he’s not there. Like an optical illusion.
I already have the genjutsu created and the next chapter(s) written. But I want you to theory-craft with me. Comment some cool jutsu ideas (of any kind) in the chat. Have fun, collaborate, and let loose. There are no stupid ideas, so let your mind run wild.
Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius
Anime & Comics · TheDreamofSomeday
I did not enjoy writing this. But it must be done.
Asoiaf: I Have a Wolverine Template
TV · Ninja_King_3834
Hope you feel better soon buddy, we’ll be here when you get back!
The pace is fine and the true measure of a good story isn’t just pacing but also substance and you have done an incredible job in fleshing out your story in a beautiful and engaging way. You’re doing way better than you give yourself credit for.
Butthe pace should already be picking up or does it still feel slow at points ?
Marvel : Homelander
Anime & Comics · Vidhan_Bhardwaj
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The Boys - Let Me Show You A True Hero!
Anime & Comics · Writing_Shirou
Hades realizing he might have some trauma
"We all are. Or do you think staying inside the stomach of our father who swallowed us didn't leave any lasting damage?"
Competent Poseidon
Anime & Comics · DaoistqZxYMH
“Ancient monstrosity created from primordial evils and eternal flames for the sole purpose of being the gard of the pit of all evil”
And since I don't have anything strong, I'll have to make do with Campe.
Competent Poseidon
Anime & Comics · DaoistqZxYMH
Franklin waved a hand dismissively. "Manipulation is such an ugly word. I prefer 'guided self-determination.' These people think they've won their freedom. And in a way, they have. They're free from corrupt governors, free from stagnation, and free to progress under the benevolent guidance of the Imperium."
The Primarch of Liberty
Anime & Comics · Shiro_Kusanagi_69