Verhygo

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I write currently a novel. You know like everyone else. Maybe you could give it a try. I mean only if anyone is reading this. XP

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Verhygo
Verhygo
10 months ago
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The fight scene was good, even if his decision to not hurt them was, concerningly, only motivated by the inconvenience it would cause. I still feel like this moment should have come later.

Verhygo
Verhygo
10 months ago
Commented

That seems like quite a tame answer after he demolished a gang. 😂

Dawn used his phone and sent the video to Saffron before he looked at Onii. He was still thinking about what to do when his phone rang. He picked it up, and Saffron asked, "Are you alright?" 

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH

Verhygo
Verhygo
10 months ago
Commented

He has a very short temper that's not reflected in his usually calculating personality.

Dawn turned to look at the man standing beside Onii, and his gaze turned cold. A sharp killing intent surfaced in his heart. This man did not only disrespect his predecessor's father but also his father, the Human King of Heavens. He spoke, "How dare you, a bunch of wretched swine, compare this bug to my father? Do you have a death wish?" 

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH

Verhygo
Verhygo
10 months ago
Commented

This feels like a confrontation that should happen after the main character found all the information needed to discern who this is. But that didn't happen, now there's not even a point in his friend even getting any of that information instead, it made no difference to any of this...

Grace opened her eyes wide, and Onii and his men were stunned. They did not expect Dawn to speak like this. Given his initial image, the young man should be cowering in fear, but this was the opposite of that. 

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH

Verhygo
Verhygo
10 months ago
Commented

Remarks how weak his body is and immediately starts a fight.

When has the Prince of Humans taken such a pompous attitude lightly? The burly guy was irritated and moved his backhand to slap Dawn. He wanted to teach this arrogant poser a lesson. Dawn was not to be taken lightly. He watched the hand move and tilted his head to the side, and the slap hit nothing but air. 

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH

Verhygo
Verhygo
10 months ago
Commented

Is that a personal insult? 😂

Dawn knew that a big park was near his house, where he could easily practice. After running for some time, his steps grew heavy, and his breathing became ragged. He sighed as he thought about how weak his body was at present. 

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH

Verhygo
Verhygo
10 months ago
Commented

Conspiracy theorists clenching their fists victoriously.

Dawn thought about the more pressing issue and began looking for things like spirit beasts and treasures. He found a few brief mentions that did not make sense to him. The concept of spiritual cultivation was just a fantasy to many people. He thought about something and understood that those who can use spiritual power must be manipulating the knowledge.

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH

Verhygo
Verhygo
10 months ago
Commented

If he had to make the investigation himself, he wouldn't know who they were yet. That could have added some mystery.

It was not hard for him to understand who could be observing them, or rather her. The people must be from Snake's gang, posted here to observe Grace. Dawn did not have the time to care about anyone. He was too weak to take any action at this moment. 

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH

Verhygo
Verhygo
10 months ago
Commented

You don't really have to announce that observation directly, it was already quite well indicated by her behaviour.

Dawn nodded with a faint smile before he vanished around the turn in the stairwell. The young lady took a few minutes to calm her emotions and mumbled, "What happened to him? He looks so different than how I have always seen him. Could it be that near-death experience bought out this change?." 

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH

Verhygo
Verhygo
10 months ago
Commented

That's a very sensible observation.

When he opened his eyes, it was already evening, and he was famished. Dawn stood up from the floor and looked at the sticky sweat covering his body. He bathed and mumbled, "I wish to go and cultivate under a waterfall. Forget the advantage. At least, I would be free from these showers." 

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Transmigration: Rebirth Of The Heavenly Prince

Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH

  • What is this, a Magical Girl Story? original

    What is this, a Magical Girl Story?

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    To answer the title question. No, probably not. It’s supposed to be a light-hearted play on the classical genre, with a slight twist. This story is about a Sophie, a young adult who gets dragged into a war between magic users from earth and the Demons trying to invade it. With her having no control over the events she gets involved in, struggles Sophie to regain at least some sense of normality in her life. All the while battling her own insecurities. She will lose everything that comforted her, but meet new friends along the way. Where will this lead her? I don't know, let's find out together.

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