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To answer the title question.
No, probably not.
It’s supposed to be a light-hearted play on the classical genre, with a slight twist.
This story is about a Sophie, a young adult who gets dragged into a war between magic users from earth and the Demons trying to invade it.
With her having no control over the events she gets involved in, struggles Sophie to regain at least some sense of normality in her life. All the while battling her own insecurities.
She will lose everything that comforted her, but meet new friends along the way.
Where will this lead her? I don't know, let's find out together.
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Great story building. I love that the author put a lot of flesh in each chapter that readers can savor the taste of the scene and the juice of each character's emotions (I just had my dinner so... HAHAHA). Grammar is on point, and the characterization- well-designed. I am intrigued by how the story will develop. Continue the good work, Author.
To start off with, the story development has the perfect balance between slow and fast. The writing quality has improved by leaps and bounds from when Ver first started, this is a great achievement and I applaud you. World Background, although it could be detailed a bit better, it's still great and fits in with the story, emphasising the parts that need it. Character Design, although a bit strange, that's good! The characters have their own quirks, personalities and abilities that make the story all the more fun to read. Stability can be ignored, we don't grade good stories on that. Overall 5/5
Writing Quality 4/5. It would've been easier to just write it all from the first person to begin with, with how much exposition is put via MC's thoughts. Also, does she have two internal voices with different brackets? What? I mean, thoughts are supposed to be in quotes to begin with. Stability of Updates 5/5 you have them i guess Story Development 4/5 The beginning (i.e. what I read) is great in terms of the plot, but the way exposition is put is quite confusing. The fact that you have a separate characters list says it all. With so many characters introduced at once a person (me) feels very overwhelmed. Character Design 4/5 Whatever characters arent blending with everyone else because of the way they were given are interesting and unique. World Background 4/5 It's a magical girl story. I won't give it a point for originality. If it hides somewhere futher on - sorry, I will believe it. The more gritty and realistic approach is a nice thing, but dark and gritty magical girls story aren't a new thing ever since Madoca Magica.
WoW! A good story indeed and I really like it. It's kinda sad that this story doesn't get the attention it deserves. Might because there was no cover, good synopsis and tag.. BTW, Good Luck!
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Writing Quality: You can tell that the writer makes each chapter somewhat self-contained. Probably because the writer writes them just the day they get released. That causes a massive dip in quality from one chapter to the next. Some being better some worse. Always depending on the current mood. Hard to tell if there is a overarching story, or if the writer just goes for it. But the the writer will sooner or later run out of ideas for the names of the episodes. That is already foreseeable. The quality is at best average, there are a lot of better written stories. Story Development: I don't even know what to say. It moves so slowly and nothing ever happens. No action and no real drama. If a problem occurs, it's solved in the same chapter. Maybe the writer was going for a realistic view. Classic cliches seem to be avoided at all costs. Kinda boring and baffling at the same time. What is that even supposed to become? Character Design: The characters seem at first distinct, but the dialog doesn't feel like actual people talking. Descriptions of their appearance is lackluster. Motivations are unclear. Updating Stability: As earlier mentioned, the writer makes each chapter the day it's released. There is no way that can be kept up. Unavoidable will that change. Either stopping completely or changing to less chapters with hopefully more thought put into it. World Background: The writer seems to have put most work into the world building. Which is unfortunately still not much. The details are everywhere and feel like way to much exposition. Also they are convoluted and unnecessary. Overall: The writer (Woman or Man) should probably rework the entire story and take some writing lessons. Which is most likely not gonna happen, since this seems more like a hobby than a passion project. I mean, come on! Have you read the review the writer gave themselves? There was probably more work put into that, then the entire Novel! It's not even funny, only pathetic. Or eventually even worse, honest.