Pragmatico

Read what was free. So far the story is progressing slowly but steady. Grammar needs to be worked on in places. Also some references are connecting with me, guessing they are cultural references. I like dnd so that concept is what made me read to begin with. The world background needs to be added upon. We don’t know where the mc is in the world what is around them in what directions. Also never specified disturbances. Hope this translation works out for you but not for me.

Read what was free. Grammar is about average for this app. Story development is steady but cliched. Character type is suppose to be a merc for hire but we get the wannabe a hero the whole time in free chapters. Also why is every female a world shaking beauty where the average women at? We have very little world building as far as directions size of cities and the borders of the kingdom. A mercenary would want this information asap. Also he didn’t have to clear the whole island to make a base could just clear the village and start construction while the army goes about its mission from my understanding. Wished to get more a feeling for the story’s path if development before it charged but good luck author

Did you drop this

Read what was free: grammar needs a lot of work. Saying wrong tenses of words, changing perspectives without notice, and other minor errors like wrong words at times. The plot has a lot of holes for me. Can’t gain cultivation from lower cultivation monsters but yet one did at least. Soul coins currency is hard to appraise since something’s cost a lot while artifacts are super cheap. One major plot hole for me is what happens to equipment of those who died inside the dungeon? Also who would ever a place 2 whole armies were practically wiped out??? Are the people in this world dumber then the mc? The world building is almost zero. No since of directions where each kingdom is or how big they are. Wish you luck but seems like enough people read this for you