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Vincent Strider was a gun for hire who made a living by killing whoever it was his clients wanted dead. But during one mission, he died in a fierce gunfight. However, death was not the end for him. Vincent found himself reincarnated in another world, facing a floating interface that flickered before his eyes.

[Synchronizing Host!]

[Military System initializing.]

Vincent found out that in this system he received, he can summon soldiers, tanks, aircrafts, and even warships! This is going to be exhilarating.

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    House
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    The novel had potential, but it suffers from several glaring issues that make it mediocre at best. Normally, I don’t write reviews unless I’ve read at least 100 chapters, but I’m making an exception this time. One of the biggest problems is the author’s lack of consistency. For example, a reward is set at 50,000 system points, but in the next chapter, it's suddenly 50,000 gold. The main character can read and fill out a form in another language one chapter, but a couple of chapters later, he suddenly can’t understand the same language. These inconsistencies pop up far too often. Another major weakness, and perhaps the most frustrating, is the main character (MC) himself, who is supposedly an assassin or soldier. Yet, he shows no sense of situational awareness. He acquires a system but barely checks it. He rushes into heroic actions without assessing anything or understanding the world he’s in. Despite having system points, he doesn’t use them. Worse, he quickly becomes a subordinate to a noble, even though he has guns while everyone else is using bows. I think the story would have been much better if the MC had leaned into a more morally gray or self-serving role—maybe not “kill-your-entire-family” evil, but more of a “me first, others later” attitude. As it stands, he doesn’t seem to think things through at all. There are too many issues with this novel for me to fully recommend it. My advice: try the first few chapters, but don’t expect it to make sense unless you turn your brain off. Based on what we've seen so far, he comes across as a complete doormat. [img=faceslap]

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    Trallen1988

    Although it's only 5 chapters so far, and I hope you don't take too long to add more, I am already enjoying the story. I loved your zombie version, so I am very hopeful about this novel!

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    Necrotic_lord

    Did you stop writing for the zombie military system?

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    Htun_Aung_Kyaw_6863

    I like you novel.The English is good and there are not a lot of error. I just wan to point out that the title you give to the novel is Military System.So I think the MC should focus and getting more powerful weapons and military vehicles. The first part is good, but later you move away from military to magic. Also, the demon king side figure out the use and make the copy of thr M4 within only one chapter that very fast. If your tilte and focus is the military system you should give the MC the adavantage of technology. Also the background of the world you haven't explain it properly. I really like military novel, yours is pretty good. So what I have written are my point of view.I appreshiate it if you read my comment and reply.If I have said anything wrong, I apologise.

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    Cyclop_Tempest

    please don't stop this one, it's really good. 9 chapters, and I'm already waiting for kore

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    BALDDAOIST

    hiatus?????????? no more update? this novel is good

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    wtfnigga

    only 23 chapters? no more updates????? 😥 hiatus!!!!😱 this novel is drop? 😭

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    LokeErBest

    Good start, a couple of writing errors and structure errors but its readable, the more i read the more disapointed i got, anything after the death of that minotaur demon lord is just not worth reading in my opinion. takes the focus away from the modern military aspect of this novel and just becomes a fully fledged fanatsy novel with guns.

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    Hades_Jades

    Damn,finally a good one👌👌👌I'm getting hungry for a content with no harem nor romance.

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    Warmachine324

    Once again I enjoyed reading your military story, this story you have shown a lot of potential and I'm looking forward to reading more new chapters soon.

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    AeonAeon

    is this harem or single FL?? Hope it's single FL

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    Miguel_Rosalez

    author-san this is a very good novel plz keep it up and add more chapters plz, Plz don't leave us on a cliff hanger plz.

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    DaoistLbwMKl

    Loved reading the story and authors use of the system is one of the best iv been glad to see more settings

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    Daoist1WrLyn

    More please [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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    BlueEarth

    The start of the story was okay but then devolves into something else. How can you replicate something you are seeing for the first time.

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    Rebel_Rebel_2784

    well this is good I like this kind of genre

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    Jordzfml_7

    i'm still early into the book but it seems like mc is the selfless hero type which is honestly not my cup of tea , does this continue further into the book?

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    Korstar26

    I have found myself hooked on this novel despite there not being many chapters so far. please don't just up and disappear leaving this novel abandoned like others have

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    kiranmayi_7721

    I felt its a bit refreshing story. may be because I just started reading these novels

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