comonerStafford

comonerStafford

male LV 15

Just a commoner

2018-09-20 đã tham gia United Kingdom
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comonerStafford
comonerStafford
comonerStafford
15 days ago
Commented

Are you having fun writing this cuase I don’t like the whole world domination stuff

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
28 days ago
Commented

This book is quite good doesn’t give you a dark feeling which is good

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
3 months ago
Posted

The start is great chapter 38 so far however there is to few chapters to judge the content. Keep up the good work

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
3 months ago
Posted

To bad it was dropped even so I enjoyed reading it very much

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
3 months ago
Commented

Cedric is a 4th or third year based on the goblet of fire making him the same year as the twins

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
4 months ago
Commented

It would be good to do a Harry Potter version of this but to start the story very early in the world and show the progression bit by bit then when the charater reaches modern times do a golden list

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
4 months ago
Commented

There are no wolves in the U.K

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
5 months ago
Commented

The updates are slow

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
6 months ago
Posted

I would say that this book is well written however the pace is to fast. You could slow down the pace of training and explain the cost of thing like training equipment and daily expenses how much you looted