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Given a second chance by a R.O.B Kenzo traded his knowledge of the Naruto story in exchange for being born a sage. Keeping his power a secret Kenzo must make his way in the unforgiving and dangerous world he has found himself in.
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I read up to Chapter 40 and I'm dissatisfied about how the story is written in the 1st point of view much like narration or diary few dialogue and interactions with other characters making the story like monotone Narration. The annoying part is the MC often handed his Made up Jutsus demanded by Hokage for preservation with some price or compensation that didn't even explain what price/ cost he receive.
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Ahem good narrative, grammar doesn't matter to me, I like the character of the mc, good strength development, the interactions are good I guess although there is a need to improve on that.
Te da la impresión de ser naruto pero bastante diferente con una pizca de "slice of life" y hace que la historia sea más tranquila de lo normal. Perfecto si te interesa ese tipo de historias
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Though with this story being a experimental writing style as the author stated, reads slightly odd, I personally find it rather refreshing. With the concept of this story being even more refreshing, as a slice of life style. The main character is rather interesting and driven, overall though it may use most of the usual power grabbing tropes of other Naruto fanfictions, it does it in a way that makes sense to the character. Definitely recommend as a nice night's worth of a read as of 75 chapters.
I am someone who is quite critical and the stories I read have certain requirements and I can say about yours it is wonderful, it is honestly art
good stuff. fun to read and the fact he doesnt know anything about the world is nice ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
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Okay didn't even notice the two new fics let's take a gander then. You always make interesting fics anyway..
It's good but the author struggles with run-on sentences, aka, very long winded sentences. But it's faced paced which makes it an okay read. Other than that, the author is also doing some world building by having a transmigrater, that got his knowledge of Naruto removed, for some boons. The author is also handling the power creep to a decent level, however the MC does feel a bit op, Ch 19, but I know that's because of his potential and not his current ability. I am looking forward to seeing how the author manages that. Overall, if you have read his earlier works, you will like this one as the author has improved.
good read, no-harem is sad, I don't know who the fl is. could be tsunade after the latest ch
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I've read the first 18 chapters, and I have to say that it's getting better and better. The fic is unique and has been well-paced up to now. The grammar is excellent, but there are a few typos here and there and perhaps a small mistake or two regarding structure, which by itself is great. The MC's abilities are growing to be more unique as the chapters go by, he is leaning toward the more overpowered side of things, but that is to be expected due to his "Wish". Overall, the fic is great, I'm looking forward to more.
Nice novel nice novel worth it , there is depth to the story and is quite engaging. C f. F f f f fd dd d. D d d Nice novel nice novel worth it , there is depth to the story and is quite engaging. C f. F f f f fd dd d. D d d
Lost interest in it pretty fast. Very cliche.