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An avid gamer nerd's dreams come true in another brutal yet lucky? fashion. Follow him as he does his best not to die in laughably humiliating ways, all while trying to escape his abrupt and unwanted servitude.
Will his knowledge of the world he finds himself help him succeed? Will he return home? Will evolve past his title of 'Dog'? Read and find out!
This will be another multiversal world-hopping story, similar to my other one, EBW. I'll not spoil the surprise of the first world, but Skyrim will eventually be involved... And no, I'll not be adhering to plot, instead destroying it and hopefully not butchering the original story in the process.
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The MC is just plain bad. He accepts being a rag even easier then Satou. While I could understand his need to play along at the start since he had no power, why is he a slave after he got stronger? And, even if Loise is 16, she looks like a gradeschooler, how can he perv on someone like that? All in all, it's a subpar work.
The story is not that bad TBH, writing is good and from what i can see is that author is consistent. Most of the people here are just giving it 1-2 stars just because they think mc is beta or simp. But you need to understand it's author's story and that's how he wants to write. If you want to read about an virgin otaku teenager who suddenly becomes alpha dominant male just because he is reincarnated to another world go read dozens or so other wish-fulfillment novels on this site. This world is set up where cards are already against mc, People are complaining about how satou dealt with being a slave better than mc well that's a idiotic way of thinking being a slave and trying to show you are not obedient towards your master would have been death sentence for sure if this anime was not a kid friendly one and if the master was not a teenage girl but rather a cruel one he would have been whipped to shape. I mean c'mon people are complaining how wish-fullfilment novels are not real enough but when someone is trying to make it a bit real people are complaining that mc is not dominant enough. I too like a cool and dominant mc but i would not just hate every other personality that the author's try to cook up. Rating a novel based on just mc's personality is not fair to the author. If the personality is not constructed properly or erratic to the point it breaks immersion i can understand that but giving it 1 star just because mc is not a dominant alpha male is just stupid.
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Bro, he's even worse than Saito. This is practically an even worse version of the familiar of zero. The original mc at least had somewhat of a spine, this one is trash. He's a loser, "Beta of Zero" should be the title
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Well not much to say. The english is good as expected of the author. But with the author it also means to expect not much romance and similar. Also no gary stue MC or generally a strong MC without a lot of suffering. Would be an ok read but sadly the MC is how others descriped it the ultraversion of a beta-simp. Its basically a slave MC who accepts it pretty easy and wont really make it better. That he behaves a bit like the cliché virgins on the wrong side of a NTR story doesnt really help :/ So great work at writing author for the grammar, but the plot and characters are for special tastes
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well not enough words cam describe how much of an annoyance this mc is so i will leave it at that. you know how people just throw the world beta to any character? well this mc truly deserves it, even saito looks like a chad compared to this mc
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It's one of those novels where the author does everything in his powers to make the mc suffer and nerf him, from start to recent 120 chapters he was nothing but what you would call a stupid mc, but this time it's not biased he really is stupid. His power gains are so inconsistent one chapter its said that the least he gets in agility by killing is 0.1 and the more powerful the enemy is the more he gains yet he only gains 7-9 for killing over a hundred soldier, dozen mages and couple of dragons.... and 8lvls. MC can do everything better but right where it matters he just turns into an anime character and just silently watches as things happen. Ohh and he's literally a virgin simp at the level of japanese mc can't even set boundaries and tell a suicidal bîsh no and let's her do whatever.
Intelligent , Manipulative , Neutral , Alpha loving people like me stay away from this book . The summary of the story is a BETA MC STORY who is humiliated by a flat-chested loli who can't quite resist (and somehow doesn't reciprocate?).
Honestly I had high hopes for this considering the past works. Sadly, the MC is one I despise. Not because he is a 'Beta' which he actually isn't one, but due to his decision making skills. A) He kills a noble after purposely provoking the guy. Then complains how the world is so unfair. Like seriously, my man, you went out of your way to attack the poor guy. B) He gets mind controlled. Honestly, this by itself is already something I despise, but the MC walked straight into this one. Pretty much, he is in prison, guilt trips his master, then goes off on a killing rampage. When he's leaving the country, he doesn't even try to sneak through, Instead he just walks straight through the boarder check and gets caught/enslaved. C) After he frees himself, he goes on a rampage and kills alot of innocents. Dragons die, the second Waifu gets burned at the stake, and he swears bloody vengeance on all. Due to the unjust treatment which has been set upon him. (Unjust = Low IQ. He brought all these conflicts upon himself.) D) Instead of the MC developing in a positive direction, plot armor reinforces this 'blind justice' or better yet a crusade. He doesn't learn anything of value since he succeeds in everything revolving around getting 'revenge'. He doesn't learn from prior mistakes and has yet to develop a positive change in his current self destructing nature. Overall, if this was a rising to the occasion type of story, this would've been rather good. Sadly, it is just a fic following some child who believes the world is out to get him. The guy throws tantrums and simps too hard by killing innocents for his 'justice'. An eye for an eye isn't even close. Its a genocide... Overall, most of his problems could've been avoided with at least a bit of thought put behind some of his less 'stellar' actions.
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Reading this story was a waste of time ( ch 73) mc has the original cheat and a Dota2 system and is still weaker than the original mc form the show, his character and power progression are far too slow for me with current pass it'll be in the three hundreds before it gets anywhere the plot with the pink haired girl is more interesting than what the MC is doing
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Reading through chapter 30, so: Add+ tag: #MC very beta #MC very pathetic #MC simp #MC masochistic #MC stupid Turn off brain to read. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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I have no clue how to write a review but, I do know one thing. That is, if this is anything like your other works, then I'm gonna have a good time reading.
This has been an interesting story but it is painful to read at times. The MC just can't get a break and it has reached he point where it isn't any fun to read anymore. For all his abilities he just gets beat down for no reason than plot convenience. The worst part is knowing he has had a really good fight that was fun to read only to immediately get intercepted by sheer luck. The MC isn't enjoyable as a character at this point, he just doesn't grow and I don't care anymore despite the potential of this story. If you like a story where the MC fails everytime it matters then here you go. I just can't muster the will to continue reading this story right now. This is one of those stories where it might be great after 100 chapters but good luck getting there.
I read it on patreon, but I leave the review here to support the author. SW was great and the one before this too. And he is my favorite writer. It's another exciting journey with Nagross. So sit back and relax.
Familar Zero. The anime that started my hate for “Beta”, lame and Garbage main characters Unfortunately it is no different here. Possibly worse because this is a fanfiction and you expect something different This mc is so fûcking lame it hurts. I dont like using the word Beta or simp anymore, but thats exactly what this mc is He becomes Louis familiar and just accepts becoming a slave. He pervs on girls then acts like a loser once he Gets caught Simps on Louis as she proceeds to beat him up, abuse him while calling him her personal dog. what happens after though? Like the loser he is, Mc just blushes cause shes naked and continues to get beat up Dont bother reading this trash