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( I don't own the other character's or the worlds that the MC travels to except himself, and other OC's )
Follow Jin Katsuo, a battle-obsessed boy, as he travels to many different places all for a good fight.
Using his favourite Martial Art's he's seen through his favourite web-toon. ( I try to do 2 chapters a day, if I can't due to a reason I'll make one that is long
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A heads up.......... C1- MC asks for jin moris abilities, saitamas strength [ saitamas strength, yes...strength ] and full control of abilities-----> Alright, for my 1st wish i would like to have mastery over Jin Mori's Renewal Taekwondo techniques and skills, for my 2nd wish, i would like to have Saitama's strength, for my 3rd wish, i would like to have full control of my power as i don't want to end a fight with one punch, because i still want to enjoy a fight... and lastly for my 4th wish i would like to travel to different worlds at will", Michael stated quickly as he felt he wouldn't have a-lot of time. --------- this is retarded cause later he says-----> Michael:" Because i've always liked the story and felt it was good...except that i feel the quirk-less are under-appreciated and almost criticised for being weak when it's all based on genetics. And that's why i need you to do me a favour.... can you make me quirk-less", Michael stated with a smile on his face, and his bloodlust and excitement rising in unison. ---------- the entire point is that MC should be powerless and he uses his own strength to win, but the MC already has hax abilities. so the entire point is lost, and fact that he states he wants prove being quirkless are strong is retarded when he has more power than half the anime characters out there -- not a review but a heads up. [ a little bit of logic is always needed for a bk, retarded shit like this just removes any interest to continue reading the bk] once again, just a heads up, rating means jackshit
if you make your MC strong why did you even put him to a weak verse just to neft him to they're level when you can just put him to a stronger verses. like a Nerf Jin Mori is a multi continental level a super nerf Jin Mori is large building level. so really he just stronger in weak verses. either you start him weak to strong or just stay true to his power no retarded nerf even in a weak verse is kinda ruining the story.
quirkless with the power of saitama?? stupid much?? saitama can one hit ko all might so what's the used of being quirkless, 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed stupid nerfed
The fights are really great but the social interactions are really not my thing. I mean great fight scenes are good and all but its kinda getting repetitive and his 'vacation' is literally written in 1 paragraph.
Writing Quality 4-Stars Story Development 1-Star Character Design 2-Stars Updating Stablity 4-Stars World Background 3-Stars Well, I would delete the First 6 chapters and Re-do them
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this is so over the top and cringey that it's hard to bear. the development , MCs thought process and actions are illogical , unnecessary and idiotic .
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To be honest one of the best Fanfics on this app. The author is gifted when it comes to writing................................................
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this is better than the top 5 fanfics I don't understand why this is not getting more stones instead there is smut fic in the top 5 wth is wrong with u guys
a A+++ A for effortin more than 1 chp and uploading this book +++ for goohd everything r good charcteras good fight scenes very good i like all novels stroy stories soil ptut all 5 stars cause why not good good good good good good good good good goodgood good good googd good good good good good good good gioid book author thx for book/story and ch:p
this is a very good novel, author why did you drop this?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
its good many would say at the start that he got nerfed its true but its because he wanted to get stronger himself and not to get instant op with saitamas power its mostly concentratet on fighting so if you want to read fighting action this ff is for you
Fight scenes are sick asf, story isn’t too developed but I don’t really mind it. Doom soundtrack goes great with this novel. 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
I love the fights kekfkfdjdjfjjfhfhffhdhicscstctcccdjrrsrjcjrcrrcjcrdcscrrdkcrcskcdccrcdssfcsssfsrxrcsssrrcccrrfscfcfsrckrrrxccrrcscrkzrcsscsffcm
Author here......................................................................................................................................................................................take your time reading this one and don't rush to drop is all i ask,,