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Ray, a super nerd virgin otaku student was transmigrated into a game based on galge.
"Ding, please prevent the main heroines from falling in love with the protagonist
Rewards: Elementary Cooking skills.
Penalty: The host will lose his house and all his property."
Wait, WHAT THE HECK!!!
I don't want all of this, please return me to my old world!!
"Ding, It was indicated that the host wants to reject the mission. Reject the mission and immediately gain the penalty Y/N"
NOOOOOOOO, What in the seven hell has I did to ever deserve this thing!!!
Follow the journey of Ray and the absurdity of the system in this story.
Other tags:
Beast taming, School life, R-18, MILF, Weak to strong, Yandere, Evolution, Annoying system, Super annoying system, Super super annoying system don't complain you have been warned.
I don't own the cover.
Hi everyone, I have created a poll in chapter 40, please feel free to join if you have any ideas or Spirit beast you wanna see in this story ^_^.
I know I can't make everyone happy, but I'll try my best, and thank you to everyone who has supported this story.
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Viết đánh giáMc is a slave to the system. Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system. I have read 0 chapters and will never even try this. Mc is a slave to the system.
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Even getting to 40 is a great achievement, I'm having a nervous breakdown while reading, mc's stupidity and the system's horror punishments, the system and mc's speeches are hilarious, it's disgusting[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
damm. This is a really beautiful novel that has a very light comedy tone. The author played the story very well from the first few chapters alone. The other people might be annoyed by the system because it just exists for comedy purposes. The system is like a rebellious teenager. That is just my first impression of this novel. Just great.
i refuse to read stupid dialogs between the system and the protagonista, there is 2 things i hate the most: Plaina protagonist and system. I could no bare read more than 3 chapters because of this anoying system, It is the most unfunny thing i've seen in a novel till now.
You can poke more holes in the plot then swiss cheese and with everything said you can always find some form of error, either what was said didn’t make sense, dumb choices, things suddenly changing the next chapter.
Tiết lộ SpoilerSigh.. i wanted to give this one a try due to the good reviews (i didnt look at the comment section yet) So i tried reading a bit and i only read half a chapter and couldn´t bear it to read it anymore. And thats coming from someone thats able to withstand reading mtl´s. The author makes quite alot of mistakes, about 5 in that half chapter. Not only that, i saw that the "protagonist" basicly added a few "!!!" to every sentence of his and his stupid decision at the start so i knew the mental age and eq of the mc and realized that he would annoy me, coming from someone that can live through young master cultivation novels, so i stopped reading this novel. Afterwards i saw the horrible top reviews from this novel and had no idea how this novel has such good reviews..
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this book cant be enjoy to normal human..i lost my braincell reading this book..cant pased chapter 5..the system and the mc super anoying. super retard
system annoys me. mehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
to read this you have to have a slight degree of masochism or turn off the brain If you try to take the story the least bit seriously, you will hate yourself.
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so far so good. I like the side character part, It adds a challenge to the story that is refreshing. another point is the system and his interactions that are funny most of the time. keep it up, my dude
I tried. got 5 chapters in. and gave up. he gets turned into a slave instantly by his system and the system is actively putting him down,...
Cliche? Sometimes, but instead of being annoyed, I found it to be fun. Cringe? Maybe yes maybe not. But for me, the story plotline is good. My only complaint is the number of words is getting smaller from chapter to chapter. This makes me think it's not worth it to exchange my fast pass or coins for unlocking your chapter.
Ive read this story to chapter 91 but i have to say the quality is good spelling and all that but reading this story gave me wip lash there is no real constant story to it everything changes and there is almost no link to the flow of the story caracters are half flushed i feel if the author could pick a direction in the story and stick with it and work on the caracters they could make a amazing story with their creativity but as this story is its almost as if its 4 stories half a.s.sedly stuffed together not to mention the random skips that unnecessarily jump time to progress plot where there was more to be shown and would of made the story far better with the detail at witch the story sorely lacks id rate this lower totally but the quality of the general writing was good and it seems to update often its the content of the story that lacks any real value and if the author can fix that could be a amazing writer as its the main part of any story
Tác giả Rysangel
Hi, guys Rysangel here. Please read my two other novels too, and give some feedback. Should I continue to write that in a serious mood or should I make a new story with a more light-hearted comedic tone?