The Mysterious Journey

LV 5

Ikasuki

Could anyone provide the original Chinese name to search for machine translation? Appart for that the story is interesting. And like everything else bleam’post. Most likely translated from a source we don’t know of yet. A new path from the lord of mystery, going to Harry Potter world then demon slayer. The only critic I can make so far Is that it isn’t always well translated, some wording are confusing and the mc is becoming stronger way too fast. He hasn’t started hogwart yet but is still almost as powerfull as an author, then went to demon slayer world where he will become even more powerfull way faster and learn all sort of techniques… Lord of mystery had an almost 200 chapter between every sequence rank up. Here in less than 40 chapter he went from rank 9 to rank 7

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

QUING FENG... name mc. 🙄 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 11

ImSnoopyDad

A very interesting proposal, the grammar is very good, the development of the story so far is excellent. The mix of LOTM and HP, like other worlds, is something different here, it draws a lot of attention, it is a very well written fanfic. (Now from what I read there will be romance, but the question remains will there be a harem?)

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Writing quality: 1 star Story development: 1 star Character desing: 1 star Name mc : Qing Feng... [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 3

Hatim_DarkestStar

I've read the first 20 chapters and Honestly I wasn't expecting much as Chinese multiverse stories are either huge hit or a miss and it didn't disappoint at all.

LV 14

gREcOvITSIoZo

it is a very good story. is there any chance we could have the original title, given that the translation has stopped ?

LV 13

MissRaven

Lotm?!????? Absolutely goated fanfic frfr

LV 2

Daos_Nine_Heavens

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LV 1

Xavierzelaya2

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LV 2

Daos_Nine_Heavens

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LV 13

GustPigey

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LV 1

Eneous

Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!

LV 3

ShifuLong

Tftn, waiting for more. ,.........,.............,..........,.............,..........,......,,.....,..........,.............,..........,.............,..........,,............,..........,.............,..........,.............,...,