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In the Sunny Kingdom, Ilona Whisper , a red curly-haired women in her twenties , is struggling to keep up with her multiple jobs to support her little sister Anise , as she works undercover as a skillful thief and as a soldier .The castle is her revenge target as the king ordered her parents' execution. Ilona is the leader of four interesting youngsters that are prepared to execute whatever she says. Later she will find out that she is something more than a simple human.
Her life isn't fully bustling till a boy with black curly hair appears in the bar she works at night. The young man named Victor ,same age as her (20 years old ) ,will twist her life in ways that she never imagined before nor she wanted to . His noble-like speech pisses her off the most ! Will she resist the urge to kill him after she will find the truth behind his origins ? Or she doesn't even need to find his origins to have the urge to slay him ?
A dramatic love story with a touch of comedy is telling the story of Ilona and Victor .
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Read the first 5 chapters and I love it. The pacing is well done while the description is top notch. Looks like web novel writers are finally focusing on descriptions. I love the dynamic between Illona and Anise. Also, I laugh when Illona compares her body with Anise. Overall, the novel is perfect as it is. Also, I love how strong Illona is instead of being a damsel in distress.
Okay...if you ask me...This story took me to my naïve and innocent youth....when I used to read and dream of adventures in the wonderful world created by the books!! I find a touch of fair tale, adventure of Robin Hood, King Arthur, and many other classic fantasy tales. Amazing...I would love to see this novel succeed. Readers...Just start reading..and thank me later.
As I normally don't read much of the novel where there is a female-lead but this one is quite a catch. The progress as how the story develops is quite good and all the minor details are also given. I would recommend that readers give it a read. This is for the Author-------> Speaking from as how I read it the parts where you have written the acts or scenarios and some paras also, they are a bit too big, which as a result causes one to skip the info you want to provide to a reader so I hope you improve, but still till the 8 Ch's I read they are quite good and also waiting for more updates
First, good luck with the WPC Contest! Second, the synopsis could use a little improvement. Maybe use a descriptive form instead of the conversation as it hooks the readers more (personal opinion), but it's just a suggestion as it kinda feels off when I read it from the description of the novel. Usually, I read it in the novel's prologue to add more hook or mystery. Lastly, the plot itself is interesting because I can already feel that it's quite spicy (lol) so I will definitely read more once it's updated. Overall, this novel has potential and I'm looking forward to its development [img=strong]
I swear this is the last time I change the cover ! LOL ! How you like that ? Da da da , da da da , da .....(Just blackpink reverie) ! I am curious ... don't keep me waiting to much !
The book is supported by an engaging plot with descriptive descriptions that help make the story shine in a beaming way. It's a book with potential.
What a compelling story! Ilona is such an admirable character taking care of Anise, and I’m loving the adorable/comedic relationship she has with her! The characters’ personalities are lively and captivating, fulfilling readers’ expectations. I’m so excited for the adventure in this story! Great job, author!
What do you think about the new cover ? I tried using pixai , and this is the most similar image with what I head in mind excluding the fact that I wanted the shirt to cover her breasts more.But I guess you wouldn't complain about it .
Good read so far. Characters looks lively and well written. Looking forward to read more.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
we got a strong female lead here😁so I wouldn't want to say much but author your work is mind blowingI love the way u detailed everything out pls keep the flag flying ❣️
"Whispers of Shadows" introduces readers to Ilona Whisper, a multifaceted protagonist seeking revenge in the Sunny Kingdom. Juggling roles as a skilled thief and soldier, her life takes an unexpected turn when she encounters Victor, a mysterious young man with noble-like speech. The blend of drama and comedy, coupled with well-crafted characters, makes for a captivating read. While some plot twists may be anticipated, the novel's rich world-building and character development offer an engaging fantasy experience. A recommended choice for those seeking a brief yet immersive escape into a world of secrets, revenge, and unexpected love.
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Honestly this book is going places, I'm liking this story, and while this story has snippets, of incorrect grammar,nuts negligible at most and doesn't interfere with the story, it's even comedic at times."how much we lost", 😂10,000 coins is wild from 1 person 🤦
I like how the story is very detailed and the descriptive on everything is fascinating. for example the scene while riding the horse something like that. Overrall this novel have high expectation from me 👍👍
This novel has a delightful and joyful writing style. It transported me to a darkened kingdom, where the courageous Ilona navigates her challenging journey with perseverance and love for her little sister. The author painted a vivid world, while the deep bond between the sisters deeply touched me. It's truly a heartwarming and captivating story that will leave you with a smile on your face. A very enjoyable read!
Here is the couple when they first met in the forest (excluding the clothes , everything is like what I imagined). Aren't they adorable ?
The novel is pretty captivating, too bad there are still so few chapters of it. To be honest, I usually don't enjoy novels in this genre and avoid them but this one was different, it hooked me from the start, and I don't think I'll manage to stop reading it.
An interesting plot of the novel, easy to read, but there are questions about the past of the main character and about the world in which the action takes place, unfortunately, in 7 chapters there are acquaintances only with the main characters, but also the age of not the main character, not other people is not indicated, it's sad. I hope in future chapters both the world and the main character will be revealed more.
This story will surely tell its tales. Now this is my cup of tea. I am enjoying while I am reading this masterpiece! Good job for a well done novel!
You've just written another good story. I think the plot is good and interesting for these 8 chapters I've read so far. It's enjoyable to read as the pacing of your story is smooth as well!
Hi guys ! This book , I wrote it for the WPC contest .The main theme is enemies to lovers and I know you will love it . For readers that know and read my previous works I have a announcement to make : I fixed my grammar ! Hahahah ! I hope you will appreciate the novel as well as enjoy the journey of Ilona Whisper and her enemy. The name of the ML is a secret .Read for more information !
It's nice how the Female Lead is portrayed in the story. She's strong and proud!!! And it's not just about romance. I hope that the story will continue like this. Good work for the author.
As a hardcore fan of this author, I’m always going to have to give 5 stars. I mean, obviously the author put so much heart into it, and it’s just so great to have another novel to absolutely GEEK over—! Literally love the author, hope you all enjoy this as much as I did! Much love, S.T <3