Stark Infinity

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Good idea, interesting route, but if I were you, I would start refining the grammar before you start losing readers. Make the timeline consistent with what you wrote in previous chapters and make it clear when he's talking in the present and the past. The time skips are confusing, too.

The writing quality could use some work, some words are missing to complete the sentences or maybe some of the letters are either missing from a word or scrambled. But that doesnt happen that much, you can still read it clearly. Updates are pretty good, just hope that it continues well. The story development is too fast in my opinion. There are too many things shrouded in mystery without getting revealed. That part could use some work, making mysteries and curiousities that could affect the story are not to be made every chapters but every now and then where it is important. Other than that, the story is good. I can't say too much in character design since i didnt pay attention much but I think since the author introduces new characters or designs every time. We need references and pic of them. Then theres the limited info of whether the character is flat or round characters. Idk, maybe whether they have their own personalities and true to themself and not just flat characters that are decided by authors. Also didnt pay attention much, but it has decent and good enough world background, since the author is knowledgeable in marvel. Plus many there are many things added making it a great one.