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A/N: The first 50 or so chapters have a comedic focus and are setup for the following plot. They are fun and introduce a lot of important characters, but don't be scared off by the lacking early plot. All of the setup and worldbuilding will be worth it.

Hitching a ride with a summoned demon, Edol finds himself in a magical new world.
Unfortunately for the young man, his dreams of discovering and exploring magic are quickly interrupted.

This new world... knows nothing like a summoning spell.

The few powers with previous information about the easily weaponizable spell quickly try to stifle the news of its existence. The moment Glory, the strongest Empire on the Eastern Continent, catches wind of the summoning spell, they move quickly.

There is finally a way for them to conquer not only the continent they reside on, but also a method to travel over to sea to claim the land of other countries.

... And if they want to acquire this new spell, who better to search for than the one summoned by it in the first place?

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    OakFlame

    After writing to chapter 60, I've decided to leave a review of what I think about my book. The writing quality is great. If it wasn't, then I've wasted the last few years of my life working on a writing degree. Much of the first 50 chapters are set up for the future of the novel, but they don't feel dry. Every time I go back to reread or edit a part of my story, I get caught up in reading and end up wasting a ton of time. It could be because I write stuff that I personally think is funny, but I love the humor. There have been multiple times when I'm writing that I burst out laughing, attracting the stares of everyone else waiting for class. Slightly less funny. Around chapter 50, I'm finally getting into the first major plot arc. Hidden schemes, political strife, and uncertain allies plague the City of Edain, creating an environment where Edol will need to struggle and learn in order to survive. Writing this has gotten to be super fun- putting together bits of foreshadowing and setting up for future events is quite the experience. I'm happy with the beginning of the novel, but I think this is where it will really shine. I hope you read and enjoy this novel as much as I'm enjoying writing it! Now, to answer a few questions you might have: Q. Is this a harem novel? A. No, there will be a single FL. Q. Is there NTR? A. No, why would there be? The romance will be wholesome. Diabetes level wholesome, if I can write it well enough. Q. Release rate? A. 2 chapters a day.

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    YSP_PW

    Not only is the story engaging but the writing quality is good as well, it develops nicely with emotions and imagery, I liked the way the writer described the scene well. Good luck with the book; it has suspense and a plotline and seems to have perfect shape and planning.

    1yr
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    Riverfallen

    It's back! I was reading before the repost, glad it's back. The first few chapters feel like a typical isekai, but it gets better as you read further.

    1yr
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    TheWanderingBard

    Really nice story/plotline, I love the comedy. Some phrases could be rephrased for clarity but other than that all is good! Looking forward to reading and seeing how this story develops! :D Keep it going author!

    1yr
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    LordSirius

    This is a great book. I love the action and comedy, especially between Mc and Ghost. I hope it keeps getting better as I read through it.

    1yr
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    No_La2

    this is seriously one of the best novels I have read ,but I have a question concerning the romance isn't Ugly demon/ghost male

    1yr
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    Daoist_Little_Yun

    The writing quality is quite engaging in some parts, but the author's lack of experience clearly shows in a lot of ways. The scene changes suddenly, and I feel like it lacks some depth to it. The MC was suddenly in another world after just a single paragraph. It happens fast, so it was quite disorienting for me. Not to mention the other things. The start of the chapter is not interesting at all. It was mostly boring until the demon showed up. The way the MC died is quite cliche, and it wasn't as comedic as the author definitely hoped to be. The cover is lackluster and can definitely use some help from an artist who knows how to letter a title. The synopsis is disorderly and hard to read. The author needs to format it, but not just that. I think the contents of the synopsis aren't interesting at all. This might sound nitpicky but I don't like how he put 'Chapter n' before every chapter name because the app already does that. It only makes the chapter titles look awful, in my opinion.

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    MotivatedSloth

    Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.

    1yr
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    OakFlame

    Hello folks! I've got roughly 40 chapters of stockpile, so updates should be consistent! Give it a read for some comedy, adventure, and a protag using uncommon weapons!

    1yr
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    FREAK_Reader01

    Giving this a five star, for no reason"...", am. still curious though,to the Author why do you write? 🤔😳

    1yr
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    Thanatos151

    This book has great potential i was reading it the first time it was posted and really enjoyed it, cant wait to see where it goes. ////////

    1yr
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    MisterFlare

    An extremely entertaining read that I'm glad to see being worked on. I especially enjoyed Edol and his big buddy's antics during the headache incident.

    1yr
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    The_Novel_Man

    A unique name and an intresting story, with the information in sypnosis and the few chaps I read, There is a huge potential in this novel if the pace and quality is matched. weldone author.

    1yr
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    Daoist_Drumstick

    Just right amount of comedy a great combination of transmigration and fantasy . I liked the book looking forward to further chapters author.

    1yr
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    XcrapttS

    GET READY TO LAUGH GET READY TO SING GET READY TO DANCE BECAUSE THIS WILL MAKE YOU DO EVERYTHING

    1yr
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