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Sloth System [Dropped]
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An abnormally lazy boy has died due to the mistake of a certain useless god, now has been given the opportunity to reincarnate, alongside 3 wishes.
Read as our mc ‘tries’ to live his life in the most lazy way possible, while putting the least amount of effort in any task that stands in his way of sleeping.
Ps.
This is my first fanfic so don’t expect much, the upload time will be random and will depend on my mood (at least once a week).
This will also be a cross over of MULTIPLE different types of anime as well as me creating a bunch of OCs.
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the idea of the story is not bad just that the beginning is a bit classic, mc is flat and there is hardly any conversion, mc is constantly being bullied by his sister, I don't know how the author intended that the protagonist is lazy but I say that he is only passive and there is a difference between lazy and passive, the story is at the beginning and can still be developed even if for the moment there has been almost no development, the author he wants to do a crossover but for the moment I have not seen anything (I don't know why he put crossover if the god said to go to only one world) I hope that the author undertakes to improve because the story as it is now is not that great
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It has awesoe grammar and punctuation. That is already an A+ in my book, and it makes you want to know more about the world he is in. The incorporarion of different elements is also done smoothly, but hey, you can take my words with a grain of salt.
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I would say this is the far interesting story for a reader like me. This development of this story is quite funny and interesting because I never read nor found any type of system that can relate to the seven deadly sin. Not to be rude, but in some story, the writer would put the the MC gaining a gamer system and saying like "I want Ban Immortality or I want meliodas full counter skill," but none of them have a system that relate to the human sin for example greed, pride and etc. So this what I belief, this story is far the most interesting story I recommended for reader that like a lazy, but strong MC system.
The story is coming soon
Good novel. Enthusiasm for writers, criticism from readers is your capital to be able to develop the work in your story in a better direction. don't take it to heart but make it a motivation to work. remember the best writer is not he only writes interesting stories but he who can finish his work until the end of the chapter.