RWBY With A SAO System (Dropped)

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Grass_Cutter

Interesting very interesting i cant wait for more and the concept of a SAO system goes perfect with rwby since their being so many weapons and hunters with things like saiyans and other bullshi’t its nice to see a balanced and good godam’n system for once

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Na1gel

Cant really say much i just read a couple of chapters i got really no good or bad to say about it ... more like annoying , i never understood this in these kind of stories... its basic human reaction to want to be good looking, strongest,fastest,smartest etc etc. no one is like" i want to be a fat guy with acne problems" so why is the mc picking a normal looking average guy as his looks ?"kirito" -_- he even stole his name that's so lame and he got a pretty wimpy attitude i don't mind a kind of or innocent attitude but that's not it he got a wimpy attitude , its written good got really no complaints just that i wrote above and that's more annoying then a complaint ?

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MahoV

I don't know a thing about rwby so I am a little lost so I am not against someone making a summarized anyway I like it . .. ..............

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AzagalPlay

Ah, yes, originality, this wonderful word that the author is selling us, poor readers. In fact everything was fine, he didn't get any wishes, he didn't die like other mcs in other isekais, and the god's backstory was interesting. Until you realise the mc is not original at all and the story development neither, the mc is your classic goody two shoes good guy and he completely copies KIRITO from his looks to even his full name. And then, the salty part, so the author wants to make the story ORIGINAL, that's why he uses the classic cliché of the daughter of god going on an adventure as mc's lover... and names her ALICE, like alice in alicization, he even gave her the same looks... Making random crossovers don't make your story original, anyone could think of a story of a random guy having ash's looks (pokemon) with Tatsuya Shiba's name (mahouka) with a genshin impact system and call it 'original' (it didn't even take me 20 sec to think of this so you know).

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DaoistZIJh4p

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LofiConic

Please comment on this story! I would love to take your feedback! Unless it's hate comments, then please don't litter this story with them.

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Dragonia_101

they character development is this story major problem. there is hardly any character development in male MC parts and author also does not hint towards any future character development in male MC in his thoughts. other than this, author made male MC too stupid. I don't even have words to say anything about it. To me personally, this story feels like story of Alice and male MC other girls as the way author writes. Warning: anyone who hates simp or beta MC who are afraid of women and follow their orders like a dog, than this novel is not for you otherwise this novel could be considered good if author focus a bit more on above mentioned things. especially his way of writing as to me when I was reading it felt like he made female MCs the main protagonist and added male MC for cute moments of female MCs

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Excavelier

this is amazing literally amazing!...... !*($)@(_!$(@?!_)_?#!_((_!#(_(&++$+_++(ʘᴗʘ✿)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)( ꈍᴗꈍ)(ʘᴗʘ✿)(☆▽☆)(✿^‿^)(◔‿◔)(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ(✿^‿^)( ꈍᴗꈍ)(≧▽≦)(*´ω｀*)

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iliketosleep

I like it ..................................,.,.,.,.,,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,,.,,.,.,..,,.

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Nan1_da_fuck

Amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing I really hope you don't drop this amazing amazing

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Night754

it's very good i hope you continue posting more chapters it's very entertaining and fun to read good concept to

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MatrixPrime

I have yet to read it but I am hoping for an awesome story with such a unique idea! I only have one request my good man, please have Ruby Rose and Salem be with the MC. I ask this for two reasons, one is that ruby rose is adorable and deserves all the love and attention possible. Two is that I have read only two stories with Salem in it when she deserves some loving, I mean think about it she is not only hot but if she falls in love with the MC and they get together and she changes then you get an awesome romance and possible cross over into SAO with two lovers! Just an idea and I will most likely read this either way....

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omobsewae

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CodexZero

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CodexZero

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Murder_Melody

I love this novel because of how smooth the story is or they can overcome the problem and how they grinding their skills and taking a good skills <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

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CodexZero

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CodexZero

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