Harry Potter : This Wizard Wants To Improve Too Much

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Bored_reader027

Heya! Translator of this work here with his shameless 5 star review. Ask me anything you want to know about this fiction here. - - - Yes, this is a Harem , there will be daily updates of at least 1 chapter per day.

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Boderic999

This is a decent time waster with a generic MC just grinding his system. However, I just couldn't continue past C49, when the MC started going full-on Chinese logic and torturing children in school. The writing quality and regularity of updates is v good though, so there's that I guess...

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Angel0fStrings

Thanks for the traslation! While I'm usually not one to read a Harry Potter fanfiction due to the high number of trash ones around, I gave a try to this one and I have to say it was worth it. The quality of the tl is good and the update speed is also more than enough

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_Rico_

Really good translation with easy to read text. The story is also good with MC who knows what he wants . Though there were some errors in translation but the author corrected it as soon as the error got pointed out,and that's also a plus point.

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Gr1m_R34p3r

It has potential. I’m not one to complain too much but I feel it’s necessary to bring a few things to light. He appears to be able to comfortably cast spells non stop despite being only 11. A talent boost is not enough to explain how easily he can cast new spells. Running into knocturn alley is guaranteed death or enslavement yet he feels overconfident like he can’t be hit even by surprise. Easily casting unforgettables and other spells without ministry notice even at home is questionable. Taking dark creatures to hogwarts without any control means is outright stupid. Enslaving dark wizards a few days into the magic world with limited power again stupid. I get that the system he has is pushing him down a dark wizard path but 5e way he embraces it to such extremities is ridiculous. This is what I think of off the top of my head. All of this comes before the train ride…

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LeonToralla

For a Chinese fic, it's pretty good and entertaining. The translator has done an excellent job translating and fixing almost all the classic clichés of this type of fic. Other than that, it has the classic attributes of Chinese fics and well, I think it's okay compared to others. The protagonist is good, he develops well, the story goes slowly but I guess that ensures many chapters and the relationships between characters are also good. I recommend it to pass the time and for those who don't complain about every little thing.[img=recommend][img=update][img=More pls]

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Korkyros

Not a bad read but strange habits for naming that don't really fit the lore of harry potter. Also was odd to call a freight transport company and ocean-going company. Also a few inconsistencies that I commented on where I found them that shouldn't exist in a purely harry potter world.

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Sohal_Ahmed_2001

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OneWound

Super good book would definitely recommend it. The plot and all the characters are really defined. Keep up the good work author..................... ..

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adn53

It's OK. 10/10.

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Olvashock

When you read a sentence with a mistake, that totally changes the meaning of the sentence... several times in a few chapters... Even though I knew it will be kind of like this, but the achievements that are like this "you breathed here's a gift", are really bad. There were several good ones as well. Mc is k. The story feels jumpy and messy most of the time. I wrote this review, because that high rating is disgustingly unjustified. I will still come back and read more probably (if I don't find good ones), but first impression is barely okay read.

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Medinator

A good HP fiction with excellent translation. The story is engaging and MC is also not a retard with the usual Chinanumbawan syndrome. Overall, it was a nice read.

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Xavierzelaya2

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DanteBlacksun

It is interesting so far and presents an easy-to-read text, although it has few chapters for now, I hope to see how the plot will continue to develop.

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Pocket_AI

It's ok, but some problems are obvious. 1. ! in the end of EVERY sentence. That's not how people speak. A lot of things from chinese fics must be fixed - that's one of them. 2. Constant use of Brother/sister between non-relatives. Again, that's not how people in HP speak. 3. Dialogues sometimes feel extremely artificial. Example: ALL things that veelas-kids say. How can I, Ethan, be bothered with making dialogues good?

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TiuLuh

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Akila_Pc

Damn this is funny and enjoyble. i like the story hope it will fully translated until story is over

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Xander_Paz

excelente amigo, que buena joya desempolvaste y me alegra mucho que al traducir hagas un muy buen trabajo, no entiendo las malas criticas, pero es normal no gustar a todos. no sé qué más decirte pero gracias por excelente trabajo

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Zay_Bhai

I like that the mc is op but i think he could have taken more chapters for character development