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4.26 (36 số lượng người đọc)
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"Be better"
Peter was cursed by those words, the very last words of his dying mother.
Cursed to be better. To be above the small squabbles... And so, the last five years of his childhood, he spent as a target of bullying, both in school and in his adoptive, step-family.
But it all changed, when a portal to another world appeared in the middle of his shed!
*****
Every supergift (castle or above) = 3 bonus chapters
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Viết đánh giá30 chapters in and I’m…bored. It’s pretty much just been fluff for the last 10-15 chapters. It was interesting for a bit but now it’s pretty much only focused on the weird romance between mc and fl. Wish I had know the main focus would be the romance before I wasted my time. Sad because the author is really good, just isn’t for me. I’m still waiting for the getting rich part. As of know virgin mc is just taking advantage of a young fox turned girl. There is nothing unique about the mc, same bumbling virus mc we’ve read in thousands of stories. Unfortunate because I was really looking forward to reading this story. Maybe I’ll come back and try reading it again at a later date. But the author need to learn how to balance their stories better. Focusing on one aspect for to long looses the readers attention. For example, cheesy romance for 10 chapters straight.
it's somewhat similar to an anime I watched some time ago he travel to other world through a gate in his house left behind by his grandpa and becomes op there the name of the anime is I got a cheat skill in another world and become unrivalled in the real world something like this
Really good story by a really good author. The title is already hilarious and catchy but the story is a bigger surprise. The amount of action and character development is very good and grounded and the immersive writing breaths life into the world background. The balance in between the serious stuff and the spicy stuff is also just perfect, can't wait for more!
I stopped and took a break at chapter 31 I think and it’s way too much filler, the actual story hasn’t even started yet before it becomes pay to read. At this point the Author already lost a good amount of readers because the story is minimal and the filler/cheesy romance just took over. I’m not saying romance is bad, but if it’s just the same thing 10-15 chapters in a row than obviously people tend to get bored and want to see something virtually interesting. The story seemed to start off good, I liked the idea of being able to go to another world while taking items through both (like that one manga/anime), but Author kind of sold, the “cringe” chapters are happening too often and are just going back to back. Really could be a good read but I don’t know, I’ll keep reading for now and let you guys know if it gets any better.
the writing is good but the actually story is slow and utterly boring. the mc is also pathetic
Made it to chapter 25 and had to stop. The MC is unbelievably pathetic, and I do mean Unbelievable. Also inconsistent. Way too much Rom-Com/ Slice of life filler chapters too early imo.
too much filler/drama/monologue ...maybe i will change the review if the novel get better in the future
This work's settings had more potential but it didn't even reach it's potential not even reaching anywhere close
so honestly, I'm not very far into this novel, but I felt compelled to make a review. I am at chapter 30, and the title does not do this novel justice. the title made it feel like a wish fulfilled novel where the Mc gets rich, makes lemons, and slappes people in the face. but really it seems pretty wholesome with a realistic Mc. whome is yes perverted but is realistic. he struggles with the "do I make a move? I'm probably just imagining that she likes me" normally I would find that mindset to be annoying. but in this novel there is a reason for the Mc to be "dense". I may update this later, but I am excited to see the character development, not just being the Mc but other characters as well. I actually hope this does not become a wish fulfilled novel because I think it has so much more potential that that. regardless of to name
loving it! found it through the sep wip or whatever that is.I don't much say besides good work author, hope you are able to continue this work for a long time.
i gave the story about 35 chapters to see if there was an overarching BBEG at least but there was none. The initial foray into the other world happened quickly and it almost lulls you into thinking things will happen.I will commend the author on excellent grammar, it is honestly the best part of this novel.
Tác giả MotivatedSloth
Hello everyone, Author here! I know this is supposed to be a review, but in my private fashion, I will turn it into a post with some basic information about the novel if you are more into solid explanation rather than vague synopsis: Genre: Fantasy/Urban with added romance Har*m? No idea, honestly. But I'm not going to add more and more girls just for the sake of it. It's not a lemons oriented novel (even if it will have elements of it) so I wouldn't consider this a har*m story. There might be more than just one love interest, though. Daily update: 1 minimum (unless something happens IRL) 2 preferable. Whenever we hit some arbitrary goals (100/1k/10k collections, set number of reviews, high vote count for the week etc) I will be adding bonus chapters to the count, that will be published within preferably a week, but up to 2 weeks in the worst case scenario. General feel of the story: MC using his portal to exploit the leverage of modern world in the fantasy one, while using the benefits of living with a system back on earth. In simpler terms, he takes advantage of both words to grow in the other. You want me to simplify even further? Look at the title. MC gets rich, gets bi*ches and slaps back at those who bullied him. Oh, and there might be a story happening somewhere in between :D As this is purely an informative review, feel free to post any questions below and I will do my best to answer them!