Pokemon Saga: Journey of a Lifetime

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The_Sophic

it's good. there were logical inconsistencies and flaws in the story but hopefully it will reduce as you gain more experience in writing. I'm looking forward to more chapters.

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JAOE_o123

only seven chapters an all of them are good, keep going and pls don't drop it's hard to find a story that is not cliche or the MC only thinks in women.....

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Frog_God_Mentor

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

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Virtuosso

To be honest, the idea is good but the execution is bad. Write in small paragraph and try not to rush so much. Readers can't relate to the mc that way . Give decent information about background for key characters and don't try to cover everything at once. The story has potential like master of tactics, just need editing and some changes

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GodOfPride_z

good novel, please don't leave it unfinished🙂 :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):

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Candace_McCord

please keep writing. this is one of my Faves so far. I want to see what happens next

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Noctua

Compared to other authors in this place his grammar is slightly above average, still bad enough to be off putting. Mainly when the author changes pov from third to first person on a whim, He doesn't use the word "of" ever and very rarely as in once every two chapters you might see a pronoun in the wrong place. I think most of above mistakes could be mended if he re-read his chapters and made a quick edit. Besides grammar the story feels rushed in the first chapters, the author wishes to change the world setting, but doesn't take the time to ease the readers into it. There is allways a feeling that there is something missing. He increments new world setting ideas without a care for timing or if they fully fit into the story he is telling.

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Azathoth2

is this a harem . ? I hope not

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JAY_L4815

It's a good story, please don't drop author👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

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Isaiah_1217

Definitely quite a interesting and intriguing book especially with how the MC is described and way how he acts around people and pokemon but also his way of thinking and coming up with different ideas and strategies using gestures and signals etc.. not to mention how he joins Team Rocket due to what has happened in his life and even more so by what The Council did to only person he cared about I'm quite intrigued by what will happen next truly have enjoyed and been hooked on this book look forward to getting the chance to read more of this book whenever ur able to get the chance to continue on with it

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Harry_potter_8070

I like it. Pokemon fanfiction like these are are hard to find. There are some mistakes but there is definitely a lot of room for improvement.

It is so hard to find books like these where the MC is not a womanizer. Please keep up the good work . :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):);););););)

I have read many books but they always get dropped. The novel is good please don't drop it. :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

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Reading_Always

Good novel please don't drop it :) :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)")"(:)::):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)"):):):):):)")")"):):):):):):):)

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Shrinidhi_7434

this story is really good, i hope it is not droped cuz it's hard to find a good story like this -------------------------------------------------------------------