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The story of an ordinary person getting stranded in the One Piece verse because of the argument he had with someone online.
Now, with a unique system that only works with money, he was sent to survive in this crazy world.
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This is my new One Piece fanfiction. As you all know, my English is not that good, so surely I will make a lot of grammatical and other errors, so please just tell me where I have made a mistake so I can correct it.
And yeah, I don't own anything except for my OC. (same goes for this cover)
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If you like my story and want to read up to 10 chapters ahead, then you can check out my pa treon: https://www.Pat Reon.com/Hit30
It doesn't have much, just 10 advanced chapters of this story, and 12 advanced chapters of my other stories (One Piece: Adventure of Leo, and Pokemon: The Guardian)
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If you want you could also join my discord server: https://Dis Cord.gg/XFYKYnvcqr
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it's one of those author that's enjoy torturing their character for no reason. it's got boring really fast.
Not my cup of tea, it has many elements that I probably hate in a novel/fanfics. Like how he is a slave to the system, indirectly through so called Operator. Unnecessarily making MC's situation harder, advising him to not do things that are advised not to, else he might face consequences. So, in short, MC of this novel is like rat in a rat experiment.
In chapter 17 author decides to add DC characters with their memories because of "a bet with a friend"... A waste of time.
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so it IS a good novel but i Personals find that devil fruits are better than quirks when you do a one To one betwen them sry For mY Bad english and I Hope you give this novel a try until now it s OK (ch 6)
Dude put DC characters into the story because of a bet is so stupid i just stopped reading after that
I was quite interested in the story at first but the main character is quite weak and is a slave to the system which is really annoying. Also why add DC characters? I’m not really a fan of that either but the most disappointing thing was the system he has.
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As an Author of this fanfiction, I will definitely give myself a pat on the back with a 5-star. ...................................................................
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Just another proof of how systems are more stupid than dumb, the plot revolves around following the system like a slave I'm aware of the low self esteem of many writers but a little love for their characters doesn't cost
Maybe I didn't understand the title, I thought it would only have one Quirk, but it turns out that it can have all of them, they should add some moderation or limitations, or maybe raise the prices: v [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
A interesting story with good (from my opinion) grammar. I just hope the author didn't drop this one also like his previous fanfiction (it was also a good one, but with horrible grammar in the first few chapters).
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