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Dude put DC characters into the story because of a bet is so stupid i just stopped reading after that
Just another proof of how systems are more stupid than dumb, the plot revolves around following the system like a slave I'm aware of the low self esteem of many writers but a little love for their characters doesn't cost
I was quite interested in the story at first but the main character is quite weak and is a slave to the system which is really annoying. Also why add DC characters? I’m not really a fan of that either but the most disappointing thing was the system he has.
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average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers
In chapter 17 author decides to add DC characters with their memories because of "a bet with a friend"... A waste of time.
Poor writing quality. Bad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad BadBad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad Bad
Not my cup of tea, it has many elements that I probably hate in a novel/fanfics. Like how he is a slave to the system, indirectly through so called Operator. Unnecessarily making MC's situation harder, advising him to not do things that are advised not to, else he might face consequences. So, in short, MC of this novel is like rat in a rat experiment.
As an Author of this fanfiction, I will definitely give myself a pat on the back with a 5-star. ...................................................................
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Maybe I didn't understand the title, I thought it would only have one Quirk, but it turns out that it can have all of them, they should add some moderation or limitations, or maybe raise the prices: v [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
so it IS a good novel but i Personals find that devil fruits are better than quirks when you do a one To one betwen them sry For mY Bad english and I Hope you give this novel a try until now it s OK (ch 6)
it's one of those author that's enjoy torturing their character for no reason. it's got boring really fast.
please don't stop uploading [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A interesting story with good (from my opinion) grammar. I just hope the author didn't drop this one also like his previous fanfiction (it was also a good one, but with horrible grammar in the first few chapters).
Tiết lộ Spoiler Dude put DC characters into the story because of a bet is so stupid i just stopped reading after that
Just another proof of how systems are more stupid than dumb, the plot revolves around following the system like a slave I'm aware of the low self esteem of many writers but a little love for their characters doesn't cost
I was quite interested in the story at first but the main character is quite weak and is a slave to the system which is really annoying. Also why add DC characters? I’m not really a fan of that either but the most disappointing thing was the system he has.
Tiết lộ Spoiler average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers
In chapter 17 author decides to add DC characters with their memories because of "a bet with a friend"... A waste of time.
Poor writing quality. Bad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad BadBad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad Bad Bad bad Bad bad Bad
Not my cup of tea, it has many elements that I probably hate in a novel/fanfics. Like how he is a slave to the system, indirectly through so called Operator. Unnecessarily making MC's situation harder, advising him to not do things that are advised not to, else he might face consequences. So, in short, MC of this novel is like rat in a rat experiment.
As an Author of this fanfiction, I will definitely give myself a pat on the back with a 5-star. ...................................................................
Tiết lộ Spoiler Maybe I didn't understand the title, I thought it would only have one Quirk, but it turns out that it can have all of them, they should add some moderation or limitations, or maybe raise the prices: v [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
so it IS a good novel but i Personals find that devil fruits are better than quirks when you do a one To one betwen them sry For mY Bad english and I Hope you give this novel a try until now it s OK (ch 6)
it's one of those author that's enjoy torturing their character for no reason. it's got boring really fast.
please don't stop uploading [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A interesting story with good (from my opinion) grammar. I just hope the author didn't drop this one also like his previous fanfiction (it was also a good one, but with horrible grammar in the first few chapters).
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