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This fanfiction is about a man from Earth being reborn as Goku.
Typical? Yes it is.
Unique? I hope to make it so.
Fun? I will make sure of it.
*I Do NOT OWN Any of the DB series whatsoever. All of this was created by the legend Akira Toriyama. I am merely putting a spin on the original DB series.*
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It's one of the best dragon ball fanfictions on here. My only problem is the cat that he gets as a pet. I feel like it was sloppy the way he implemented the character.
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Was fine till chapter 12 but since upload of chapter 13 I can see it going down Drain...... Author clearly lacks imagination and ideas and I don't even know if he has seen dragon Ball.....
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Very nice. I like the way you are starting this it's different from the way any other fanfics I can remember reading start. Very nice. I like the way you are starting this it's different from the way any other fanfics I can remember reading start. Very nice. I like the way you are starting this it's different from the way any other fanfics I can remember reading start.
System. Apparently the author would have liked to make fanfic a harem. Protagonist never watched DB Sistema. Aparentemente o autor gostaria de ter feito da fanfic um harém. Protagonista nunca assistiu DB.
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I am enjoying so far the story development is good even thou its give me cringe i really hate the name john but evey thing in the story is five star except design
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I like the mc, I also like the direction of the story is moving.... Also I like the interaction of the mc with his family every now and then... I suggest make like filler Chapters that describe Mc with family going to amusement parks or some sht.. Coz i kinda liked the fluffy feeling ya know... xD To those wandering if this is a good read, I'll say NO, Because it's a great read... :D
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