Naruto: The Template System

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mikedanger

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

LV 4

Sekiyuutei_7

hey author you better get him together with kurenai or your truly would be truly angry 😂 seriously kurenai for the win ....................

LV 1

Philip_Junhi

No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!No Harem!!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!

LV 4

hunte_pro

well by honest opinion on this 1. the conversations seemed to be forced 2. I feel characters need more background development 3. need more in detail narration 4.try to take it in a slow pace(suggestion) 5.try to make changes realistic(suggestion)

LV 4

GuestReader69

This has been a fun read. Had to drop it after chapter 87 though. I would've dropped before that but I gave it a chance as author said it will make sense by chapter 87. Unfortunately, it just doesn't cut it. All the build up for MCs character and skills were wasted.

LV 14

Joshua_Swan

There were some issues earlier with xinxia style talk but that ended quickly great up until the 80s chapter wise, unnecessary injuries for plot, unnecessary drama for plot, I suspect what happened is cannon diverted so much(a good thing imo) that Author wanted to try and bring it back.

LV 5

Pavan1234

Highlight of this fanfic is Mc's cheat, The Template System. (Hope author doesn't give too many character templates for Mc. 1 Character Template is Excellent. 3 Character Templates is very good. Anything more than 3 is bad) Plot premise, plot progression & Mc's characterization are just good. Character interactions are above average (Some are clichéd, some are cringy & very few are good) Hope author completes this fanfic. Hope more fanfics with this type of template system can be seen in future.

LV 5

IZenusI

Really good story with great ideas. Unfortunately the main character suffers from missing braincells and young master syndrome. There are over 6 different situations within the current 30 chapters alone where he makes possibly the dumbest choice possible and then immediately afterwords goes oh no. Not only is the main character stupid but his plot armor is so strong that the whole world is made stupid. A situation that is very clearly a possible driving point and could be used to teach the MC to not be stupid? Oh no the third hokage and danzo are delusional for four years through 4 different obvious incidents. I would recommend reading this but you will lose braincells so be aware of that.

LV 1

NeaCambelt

POURQUOI Simuler ca mort et meme si c pour ton histoire au moins trouve une logique derriere leur mort frere sarutobi na jamais quitter le village alors c debile et c pareil pour danzo il reste toujour au village dans l'ombre franchement gros si inutile et ca se voit pour n'importe quel ninja de konoha que danzo et surotobi ne devrait pas etre la sur un champs de bataille le general et jamais sur la premier ligne

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Aaron_Gepitulan

Dropped. Mc is likely missing some braincells. Characters doesn't act differently from their original personalities . Also I have problems about this 'Chinese novel' type of interaction between characters plus the fact that's not how they're personalities act. Characters feel like Empty husk.

LV 14

Nr1HaremHater

I don’t Really know what to say about this novel. For me it has too many Chinese Vibes, words like “sneered, disdain, giving face, senior, brat” etc just ruined it for me.At least there was no “ currting death”. The Uchihas are portrayed like a typical Young master Clan and the Hokage like a scheming and stupid villain. I know that the Author read too many Chinese novels and his very being is already corrupted, that’s why I know it will take some time to write a story without the typical Wuxi’s stuff. I just hope someday the Autor will rewrite some chapters. If I made some mistakes please correct me, English is not my first language. I want to learn through my mistakes. I hope I was not too harsh with my review, it’s still a great fan fic but currently just not for me.

LV 4

WebMaster

Everything is good, but a lot of unnecessary things happen. The template system is hella weird. The MC just slowly turns into people it's only 1 template so far, but he just morphs into that person

LV 1

timeawayfromstress

Why did mc become friends with this girl, he is not the type to manipulate people, she is just a burden to him. stupid mc, beta mc, mc acting with his emotions, mc without brain.

LV 13

Leo_Bassist

It's good at the start like Chapter 1-20 after that chapters MC slowly becomes dumb. And too many cringe plots and force plot. I really like this ff at the start but I'm disappointed. So I'll change the ratings. Before I give 4.8 now I can only give you 2.6 and I hope you don't become like other chinese author, bcuz your story development are really like the chinese story.

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DeathInside

This is the first time I am writing a review, but the work is done well, there is nothing to say and add, while there are only a few chapters here, and it is not clear whether it needs to be changed and corrected, criticized and so on or not, but if everything goes the same, then the story will really turn out to be the best that I have read! Thank you for your work, author-sama! Using translator for this!

LV 4

Lucy_Carla

this book will sell good in chinesse website... because this fanfic contain chinesse style writing ( this old lady , emperor/king temperament, mysterious words, hypocrit mc, show off mc, etc )

LV 13

mythoscribe

The story is very interesting until chapter 27 there are very few to no mistakes the writing quality is good...The flow is kinda Chinese it gives xinxia vibesb (in terms of writing style not the storyline) though very low but it gives a bit of Chinese novel vibe sometimes...

LV 3

Search1999

mc is not smart, beta, behind the girls, acting like a simp. I mean, is it just me or now a days all the things are like this. i can't enjoy them anymore. maybe cuz i am no longer 10yr old. it's ok. it's a good book by story at least. so not liking it is just my personal opinon

LV 10

lycke

novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

LV 11

Vincent_Latta

the only thing I have any questions about with this fanfiction is will he ever get another template since yk it is a system other than that tho the novel is great fanfiction so far and I would recommend it to people who like Naruto