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I read all of this story not realizing it is a scam marked completed with no ending and only 1 chapter in 3 years. I will have to look out for scams like this in the future.
Good story, unfortunately the storyline is too fast. Maybe the author has run out of ideas or maybe the writer just wants to finish quickly. Well it can be said that a good funfic overall.
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Author, why are u deleteing this fic? it was good! are u gonna reqrite it? after all they did go to a new world at the end of it
Thanks a lot for this absolutely magnificient work. This IS clearly one of the best fanfic I ever red in m'y whole life. It's addicting and even if some parts aren't what I would have liked, it's not my story. [img=recommend] Thanks a lot to the author for bringing such a piece of art to the World !!!
This was fanfic was really good on my opinion. The only thing people might not like about it is the grammar is sometimes wrong. Other than that it is pretty good.
How the hell it got this rating is beyond understanding. Nerfing MC for the sake of what OG plot?
The author makes a lot of plot mistakes that ruin the story but when the mc faked his death to “protect the village” that’s when I dropped that was just so dumb he’s only weaker then like 10 tails madara so there was no threat
giving five stars for the great journey, can't wait to see what you have in store next.
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After chp 100 onwards everything is dumb so many forced plots. Mc has full strength of shanks and a quarter of ichigo. The author made the Mc so powerful everything just became meaningless a forced drama of faking death to "protect the village" . Has so much strength but does nothing
Does this story continue? It was a really good story The characters in the story are very good I have been waiting for 2 years for it to continue, of course if it continues
I am Thai and I really like this fanfic. May I have permission to translate your novel?
A good read. some grammar and spelling issues . but overall I recommend this.
Sigh. Okay, author missed an opportunity to make MCs female associates more than airhead preteens that only exist to fawn on MC and the mail ones only to be jealous. I guess our grown a** soul MC not actively grooming an underage harem (yet) is a plus. Author said not to take it serious, but it is what it is. Not impressed with MCs team surrendering their agency by letting him fight the Genin exam alone. Even with his win, it should have been a team fail. In fact, MC volunteering to take a jonin on solo, on record, when he'd wanted to be low profile is confused. Hiruzen is the typical Chinese Fanfic hypocrite archetype, holding on jealously to his power while smiling at everyone he's secretly screwing over behind the scenes (I wonder what informed this perception of him? Is it culture? A product of the political system?). I guess this fic isn't as bad as it could be? The writing is better than passable on a technical English level. One or two novel ideas get brought up. I suppose I can let it play on for a while longer on text to speech. If I had to read it directly, I may have considered dropping it. Can't speak on updates as I'm way behind. Guess time will tell.
Interesting and with the system well integrated, although perhaps a little OP. Besides, nothing to say other than the fact that the ending is quite rushed, but it's better that way than an incomplete work.
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Really interesting take on template system & story development! Thank you for finishing author san!
I love the writing style, its fun to read. i also love how its start before canon. but the end seem to rushing.
Another garbage Chinese novel, accurate portrayal of Hiruzen btw, other Naruto fics depict him as a saint like negawatt
dont believe 5 star reviews guys. plot is so bad that i wanted to cut my wrists from frustrations. i really tried to read past ch 100s but its get so much worse i hope u guys dont experience this
baited by reviews, the novel has to be a chinese translation. albeit a bit better than MTL novels, so the author put in a little effort into the translation. the author has some seriously incorrect or non-canon assumptions about characters (hiruzen, danzo, asuma etc) all these people act like complete retards.
it was kind of rushed but exceptable as it was first time writing a novel the author has already done his best. I also suggest that the author should try giving the characters more life or a special aura like charisma. A few words who want to read this novel (It's all about enjoying) As long as you enjoy reading then it's worth reading .I really enjoyed this work I hope your kind soul may find solace this piece .
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Just a waste of time, endured over 60 chapters of pure Chinese bs and the story is just cut halfway
I read all of this story not realizing it is a scam marked completed with no ending and only 1 chapter in 3 years. I will have to look out for scams like this in the future.
Good story, unfortunately the storyline is too fast. Maybe the author has run out of ideas or maybe the writer just wants to finish quickly. Well it can be said that a good funfic overall.
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Author, why are u deleteing this fic? it was good! are u gonna reqrite it? after all they did go to a new world at the end of it
Thanks a lot for this absolutely magnificient work. This IS clearly one of the best fanfic I ever red in m'y whole life. It's addicting and even if some parts aren't what I would have liked, it's not my story. [img=recommend] Thanks a lot to the author for bringing such a piece of art to the World !!!
This was fanfic was really good on my opinion. The only thing people might not like about it is the grammar is sometimes wrong. Other than that it is pretty good.
How the hell it got this rating is beyond understanding. Nerfing MC for the sake of what OG plot?
The author makes a lot of plot mistakes that ruin the story but when the mc faked his death to “protect the village” that’s when I dropped that was just so dumb he’s only weaker then like 10 tails madara so there was no threat
giving five stars for the great journey, can't wait to see what you have in store next.
Tiết lộ Spoiler After chp 100 onwards everything is dumb so many forced plots. Mc has full strength of shanks and a quarter of ichigo. The author made the Mc so powerful everything just became meaningless a forced drama of faking death to "protect the village" . Has so much strength but does nothing
Does this story continue? It was a really good story The characters in the story are very good I have been waiting for 2 years for it to continue, of course if it continues
I am Thai and I really like this fanfic. May I have permission to translate your novel?
A good read. some grammar and spelling issues . but overall I recommend this.
Sigh. Okay, author missed an opportunity to make MCs female associates more than airhead preteens that only exist to fawn on MC and the mail ones only to be jealous. I guess our grown a** soul MC not actively grooming an underage harem (yet) is a plus. Author said not to take it serious, but it is what it is. Not impressed with MCs team surrendering their agency by letting him fight the Genin exam alone. Even with his win, it should have been a team fail. In fact, MC volunteering to take a jonin on solo, on record, when he'd wanted to be low profile is confused. Hiruzen is the typical Chinese Fanfic hypocrite archetype, holding on jealously to his power while smiling at everyone he's secretly screwing over behind the scenes (I wonder what informed this perception of him? Is it culture? A product of the political system?). I guess this fic isn't as bad as it could be? The writing is better than passable on a technical English level. One or two novel ideas get brought up. I suppose I can let it play on for a while longer on text to speech. If I had to read it directly, I may have considered dropping it. Can't speak on updates as I'm way behind. Guess time will tell.
Interesting and with the system well integrated, although perhaps a little OP. Besides, nothing to say other than the fact that the ending is quite rushed, but it's better that way than an incomplete work.
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Really interesting take on template system & story development! Thank you for finishing author san!
I love the writing style, its fun to read. i also love how its start before canon. but the end seem to rushing.
Another garbage Chinese novel, accurate portrayal of Hiruzen btw, other Naruto fics depict him as a saint like negawatt
dont believe 5 star reviews guys. plot is so bad that i wanted to cut my wrists from frustrations. i really tried to read past ch 100s but its get so much worse i hope u guys dont experience this
baited by reviews, the novel has to be a chinese translation. albeit a bit better than MTL novels, so the author put in a little effort into the translation. the author has some seriously incorrect or non-canon assumptions about characters (hiruzen, danzo, asuma etc) all these people act like complete retards.
it was kind of rushed but exceptable as it was first time writing a novel the author has already done his best. I also suggest that the author should try giving the characters more life or a special aura like charisma. A few words who want to read this novel (It's all about enjoying) As long as you enjoy reading then it's worth reading .I really enjoyed this work I hope your kind soul may find solace this piece .
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really nice story loved it a lot [img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
Just a waste of time, endured over 60 chapters of pure Chinese bs and the story is just cut halfway