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Transmigrated into a Minato Namikaze Self-Insert with the bonus of the Pika Pika No Mi, plus a special body from the One Piece world with Chakra.
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Viết đánh giáthe original minato is much better than this copy, author nerf mc........................................................................................................................
Like the story so far. I find it realistic that initially minato would struggle with his throwing techniques and especially tiajustu considering he is an orphan and doesn't have access to clan techniques and training. One thing he should really focus on though is Chakra control. In this world it is chakra that reigns supreme.
Tiết lộ SpoilerWe're starting the story for now, so I don't have much to say.... the story is well written, but the update rate is a little bad, mainly because the author posts the chapters and deletes them to change something .... but that's not a bad thing, it's just that we've been at the same point in history for some time
Você está alongando demais a história que já ficou chata, você não está entrando em nada de interessante e não está criando um enredo original, está fazendo muito filler, assim como em seus outros trabalhos. Espero sinceramente que você não continue assim.
Like most of his stories it’s soooo slow. Like infuriatingly slow. It’s seems to be a trend in all of his works, some more than others. I just read 13 chapters but not even 2 days had passed in the story. Sure it builds immersion and stuff but there’s so much description of his thoughts for every action he or anyone else takes so I find myself skimming most of it. The writing is superior to most of the other fanfictions on here and I’m sure there’s already a set direction which he is going to take the story in. It’s a story you can read when you’ve got nothing else that is good but not something which makes you want more and more of it.
Love the story so far and I like how you made it an AU with tsunade being married to Dan and having a daughter. It gave your fanfic its unique setting. However there are a few things to be said about your writing. While your ideas for the story are great, the writing done by the AI is not. The repetitive use of the word determination starts to get annoying the more you see it. I mean I already get he has it but at least put some 'human' feelings into the description and the reasoning behind it. Like you missed the part where mc needs to be shocked when he found he is an AU when he found the existence of Tsuna who shouldnt exist in the first place. The emotions of the mc is one dimensional as if he is a robot with 'determination'. This gets obvious the more you read. Besides your somewhat slow update speed, this might be the flaw I can't just sit and ignore. Other than that, I find the story enjoyable. Keep up the good work.
Tiết lộ SpoilerLove the story, its a slow progress type of fic but it builds the characters and interactions, and makes them more relatable and believable. Great take on the relationships between characters as well. Good job, keep it up
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I'll post another review about this story! It's an extremely slow paced story, but don't let it fall because it's very good! and about Minato, who many people are saying are nerfing him compared to the original... that's a lie! Minato, throughout the story, evolves his power in an extraordinary way to the point that at the age of 10 he was able to defeat a group of Chunins and Jonins alone!....
Great writing good direction for the story Great harem development good pace This is a great read
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It's great, I just wish updates were more frequent. though I gotta say, with so many fics in the running, it's pretty impressive.
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