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Leonardo Marcia, a 30-year-old footballer from Verona, Italy, experienced a devastating injury 15 years ago, causing him to be released from La Masia, FC Barcelona's youth program. Despite multiple trials, he was rejected by most teams, leaving him no longer a promising prospect. In spite of being fat overtime, Marcia still adores playing football with children in the park and died whiles playing with them. He regrets squandering his talent and never reaching his full potential as a professional athlete.
In a new world after he transmigrated, he received a Blue Lock invitation. The real story begins on from there.
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Viết đánh giáit's perfect( that's all I have to say) p.s plz don't make it a harem fic, I know the story is about football, but nowadays harem is all over the place😢😥
Literally the best blue lock qu. and I have had the pleasure of reading and above the update of the chapters is frequent, so honestly the only thing I can ask author is that please do not leave this fic🗿👍
I just came across this and let me say it’s one of the best blue lock fanfic or novel there is out there, for me at least, though I don’t know many of them, the protagonist has a clear goal, stated in the first chapters and is slowly (not so much) working towards it, -I just wish we could have a more slow pace- but it’s a good read.
A genuine Blue Lock novel. Keep updating brother, your story is really really good. Looking forward to how the story folds.
Good story development, as well as a striking main character. So far I like the story. Hopefully the author will put more details on the main character, such as appearance and highlighting his strengths
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Deserves 5 stars but hope you won't abandone it and update it constantly (inform when taking a break).
I love this book,it's well written and doesn't make the reader get tired of it too early,it's the right balance of exciting and plain and that's what I like about it,the MC is op which is one of my favorite things :)
The writing is rough but could be improved. The MC's personality is inconsistent. Plot should be planned more properly. Author should focus more into the chapter's quality rather than its quantity.
~Warning ⚠️ This is my first time making a review.~(currently at ch 23 >Writing quality It is not good, but it is not bad, there are some inconsistencies in some of the sentences but it is bearable👍. >Updating stability It is great 😁the author posts every day so there is nothing to complain about. >Story development It was okay in the beginning but after the first selection, the MC turned into Isagi with a system with the same losses, and everything. >Character design The character is good 👍 the author includes their personality to life in some chapters 👌. >World background The background is okay we know almost nothing about Mc’s life but this might change in the future. >Overall The story has potential if the author edits his chapters and diverges from the plot and stops making the mc Isagi the story will be great. ( I am by no means a professional and am just commenting from personal experience )
this has potential. i just hope that the author takes his time with the story and not rush things… but it is great so far!
so has this fic been dropped or.... because I see it's on hiatus but it's been on hiatus for a while. Author, if you're reading please leave a reason for your absence.
Много глупых моментов. Автор не в состоянии сделать нормальный сюжет, чтобы система не мешала развитую MC, в итоге, когда система в сюжете развилась до ИИ, каким-то магическим способом МС забыл о своей системе, о своих многочисленных навыках, да и вообще такой тупой момент. Дайте лицо автора, мне хочется блевануть на него.
I could say a lot of good things about this fic, but I'll just say one thing, what a beautiful cover! THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS
this is book is amazing i like the pacing and the back story the system is being executed wonderfully
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The way the author explores different aspects of the characters' lives is incredibly immersive, and I find myself deeply invested in their journey in blue lock. The attention to detail and the consistent storytelling keep me hooked, making it hard to put down. It's a rollercoaster of emotions, and I just can't get enough of it! Kudos to the talented author for creating such an amazing fanfic.