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Helios was a legend, a miracle and God to many. However, he was also recognized as the bringer of death as that was the only known trace he had ever left behind of his existence.
Nevertheless, after conquering a city and leaving behind an irreversible mark on the world, old age caught up with him. With his lover gone and kids old, it was time for his final wish and desire to come true.
After building a special spacecraft, Helios flew into the sun's surface, and the ship exploded as his heart gave its last beat.
But his story doesn't end there. Helios reincarnated into Marvel inside a sun's core before being sent to an orphanage on earth 616 (original earth) as a one-year-old by the sun's rays.
With his past life complete, Helios starts anew with the potential to surpass even the gods and the goal to conquer not a city but the...
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Author Notes
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This story takes place in an MCU (marvel cinematic universe) that is an AU (alternate universe). Thus, there will be changes to the original plot.
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I enjoy this story, but it feels more like a diary than a novel. There isn't much interaction; it's like, "I did this and did that. I'm handsome and I'm a god. I will take over the world with my godly powers," etc. sigh this story would have been enjoyable if the chapter are a little longer as well.
I will not say that the novel is enjoyable, and I will not say that it is boring. It is in the middle for me, but it can certainly be better if more conversations were introduced between the characters and social interactions. The chapters so far are almost an internal monologue with only increasing strength.
I'm very half and half with this FF. While it doesn't have the usual problems of other FF's in this genre, or grammatical errors. It lacks story and is boring to read. Its just the same thing every chapter of him training achieving something then training again. There is hardly any dialog between him and the other characters in the FF or any character development. The next milestone doesn't feel like anything because there is nothing to strive towards. With no goal in mind, all striving towards strength just seems pointless. What this FF needs right now is something for the story other than the same MCU plot. Be it human bonds like friends or family or you can go full God route. But he needs purpose other than training to stop the next big bad. with the plot being repetitive it's just boring to read. Other than that I believe you have a good story on your hands even with the flaws and has potential to become a great Fanfic. I'll give it a 4 star right now given the FF barley started and I hope to see its improvement over time.
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A fic that has potential, no grammar mistakes, persistent update rate, short chapters(unfortunately), a little fastpaced opening arc for my taste and lastly unknown world background(MC didnt even do any research to find out witch verse he is) overall good for curing boredom.
So far I love the story it’s a great use of an character that is technically overpowered but still has his limits. I’m actually surprised at how well the author was able to humanize a being that can’t move at light speed without the weaknesses of a flash 🤣. It’s actually amazing so far and I can’t wait for more chapters
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