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What if Zoro finds a demonic sword? A sword that has the soul of a reincarnated person. Will this devil corrupt Zoro? or perhaps befriend him and join the Straw Hat crew adventure?
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Viết đánh giáWonderful idea, could go far. Writing is run of the mill but for webnovel it could be considered masterclass. Would love to see it succeed but most ffs like this are dropped. Please prove me wrong and keep doing good, I appreciate it. I know saying this should be obvious but please stay away from romance and webnovel degeneracy.
I just created this account to write a review since I felt pity towards you. So far this novel's start has been good. The idea is also nice but I have seen many novels like yours who are later dropped. So please dont drop this or take a very very large break.
The story is good and it’s already hinting at future plots. There’s some mistake in grammar but it’s ok, you can barely notice. The update is good as of right now.
well in all honesty the concept is good and could go pretty far actually iIlike it when author follow the cannon but change things or create another plot beside the cannon but not entirely getting rid of the cannon
This story idea is great. The only issue that might occur is that it seems that the author is playing on having 7 perspectives from different swords occuring simultaneously. And this can cause some confusion. Fortunately it seems that he has decided that one of the swords is the main story with the others being add ons.
ta buena, es un concepto interesante, esta bastante bien escrito, solo deicr que es un poco apresurado llegar y aprender haki, primero deberian dominar algunas tecnicas de rokushiki
it's an overall good book with an interesting premise unfortunately the updates stability is horrible if you ever manage to greatly improve your update stability I will look past the other minor defects and give you five stars
Basically, this is one of your reincarnated as a sword stories where the sword teaches its wielder. The premise is interesting, and the author isn't afraid to leave the canon Strawhat's route. There's only one problem: the author has no idea where he's going at all with these extra bits. There's plenty of spelling and grammar mistakes, so writing quality isn't that great. It's also kinda cringe by moments, but since it's not taken seriously, it's fine. Character Design: most of the strawhats are fine and true to their character, but Zoro is way off. like incredibly off. I'm also not personally a fan of making Zoro physically transform into a demon that's not Asura. updating stability, not great either. all in all, has potential, but the author needs to find where he wants to take the story
It's new so I guess I'll just give it a 5/5 even though I haven't read it yet (눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)
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IDC IM GIVING MY SELF A GOOD REVIEW SINCE NO ONE WANNA GIVE ME A REVIEW.... just give me a review bruh, it dont matter if it's bad or not, i wanna know what people think about the fanfic