I Am Energy In Dc

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_DEKIM_

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Excellent Fanfiction! Extremely accurate in addressing DC's absurdities. I hate how Superheroes actually care more about the lives and safety of villains than the people they claim to protect and the rest of the world, in-universe, sees this as an example of their heroism and unparalleled kindness." heroes"

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ADS21

Pretty Good Story, with interesting MC. I like the direction the story is taking. I would prefer if MC breaks the concept of either being a hero or villain and just does whatever he feels like.

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thisnovelsucksdude

I've read up to chapter 70, the protagonist is in maybe 1/3 of the chapters and that's being generous. The author continuously promises in the comments that "Oh I'll make the MC more active, oh I'll put the MC in more chapters, oh I'll stop making 3/4 of the novel from the POV everybody but the Mc" and yet fails to deliver time and time again giving out moronic excuses like "I just got so caught up in the world building (there is none) guys pwease forgive me🥹. This entire novel can be summarized by these few things. (•) Protagonist who's hardly in the novel and when he is he's pretty much a side character who does nothing but spout pseudo-intellectual gibberish every once in a while. (The overwhelming majority of text is from the POV of others.) (•) The novel, especially during the 20-50 chapter mark is riddled with Chinese-esque writing where you can find Chinese proverbs, metaphors and similarly Chinese plotlines; when I tell you this protagonist is the most passive incompetent Wuxia/Xianxia rip off MC I've ever seen I mean it. Every action from the MC mimics that of a Chinese young master from constantly making claims he doesn't back up to letting enemies go 24/7 to further the plot that never goes anywhere I mean the only character of relative importance that he's killed so far was (SPOILER ALERT) The Joker, every other character death (there aren't that many) were grunts and OC's. (•) The Author. As I mentioned before the author makes countless false promises claiming they'll improve their quality of work only for said promises to remain unfulfilled or for things to be made even worse. Often times you'll find comments criticizing or even asking the author simple questions regarding the novel to which the author will either respond with things such as "maybe" or "we'll see" like a corny teenager who think they're being mysterious; sometimes even liking comments but not responding to genuine questions from readers. ----------------------------------------------------------- Oh also! MC's first use of his power is to make a T-shirt, pants and give himself the mangekyou sharingan. Do with that what you will.

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Flaminfiend

The story has been alright so far, but it feels like every time we get a chapter with the MC we get 5 more without him. Sometimes it feels like he just stops existing. The author also hasn't really given me a reason to care about the MC as he is really apathetic. Feels like if nothing caught his interest then he would just spend years staring at a blank wall while gathering energy.

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Lucas_Oliveira_2302

The MC will only have one girl, right? because it doesn't have the harem tag which is rare but doesn't mean it's a bad thing, so who will be the lucky one who gets to get the MC?

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The_man_The_myth

Stories like this show just how low the standards are on here the only thing decent about this story is the update schedule. It’s a badly written edgelord with op powers and carbon copy characters

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LastGod

Edgelord MC with sharigan and no emotions. So this is basically gonna be a battle manga where he just kills a bunch of people and zero nuance will be had. Just a very lame way to do an OP MC.

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Bloob

It seemed good, the typical author who thinks they are better than hired comic writers, which is technically true but also the authors are looking at comics extremely superficially and reaching the same conclusion which is annoying. Anyway, the fanfic goes into debate lording really quick and mc stumps superman in the marketplace of ideas, so cool! When the author didn’t want to think of how the argument would actually go and simply wrote “then everyone clapped and Albert Einstein gave me 40$” I thought that the author was just the same type of cancer of comic book writers

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CTHULHU_YOGSOTHOTH

Ok so let's do this. First of all, I want to say that this novel is really good. The quality the updates and everything was good. I said WAS. The story was going on a very GOOD direction the characters, and everything was good but but the author decided to f this up. The personality of the mc changed. He became passive he let people walk over him even though he can kill them and become the strongest being within seconds, but he doesn't do it. Many stupid people were saying he can't become the strongest and other bullshit things, but I will just tell you this that as long as he has enough energy then he can do anything ok ANYTHING. So, I don't get how people still run away from him when I will tell you, but he could treat the Real Darkseid like he was toy with only 30 thousand energy units but the author gives stupid reason of him for not taking over the Godsphere and the plots becomes repetitive no scratch that there was no plot after him beating the Darkseid it became ur XINXIA TYPE BULLSHIT where he lets enemy run then enemy comes back finds that he can't even damage him then proceeds to run away and repeat this process indefinitely. All was lost for this book, but I guess the author decided to return the previous personality since the previous one was good OR MAYBE BECAUSE PEOPLE WERE LEAVING, I THINK HE GOT THE MESSAGE, so I suppose those won't be happening again and if u just don't read the part of him becoming too passive then I think its all good

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best_reviews

it was pretty good for a casual book it's not perfect or close to it but it's very well written for a casual book and I just like the concept of the character

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Mockingbird_2179

As the story progressed, the author forgets what he wrote down and what his character truly is. The first 50 chapters are cool after that, I suggest stopping.

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DaoistHe92kj

Muito bom! Uma das melhores FanFiction do DC Comics que já li! Personagem principal bastante inteligente. Só esperando um pouco de Romance. Gosto de harém, mas se tiver pelo menos uma heroína, também será bom, aposto na Kara, pois gosto bastante dela.

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fake_sage

I love your story fam, yeah it has its flaws, but then again, which story doesn't? As long as it's entertaining, that's good enough for me. There are a few typos that you may have to correct, but then again, no big deal. Keep going man this has so much potential

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_Tea_Lover_

Overall book is meh. Amazing premise, terrible execution imo. MC is only in about a third of the chapters I've read, maybe less, and a large portion of the chapters he isn't in aren't even related to what he's doing at the moment. Mc feels like a self -insert/wish-fulfillment character. Mc acts super smart and Justice League can't think of any comebacks, ever. I'm not sure if the author isn't smart enough to think of comebacks or if it just helps bash the JL more, I personally think both. Mc is just a stereotypical emo edgelord. This whole entire story is just one big wish-fulfillment with the sole premise of "strong person makes fun of Justice League, haha". The whole thing is entirely Justice League bashing. Out of all the chapters, ⅓ has Mc, and the rest are all just different ways of bashing the JL.

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Emu_Lator

Mc is written to be apathetic and bored but when he gets an opportunity to make things interesting by interfering, he just watches instead. Its too contradictory to someone who wants entertainment coz he ignores the opportunity all the same. I did not enjoy this fic one bit

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Krasher024

It felt like a chore to read and it the main character is dull. I can't tell you if it gets better because I only read the first 5 chapters, but oh well give it a shot maybe it is something for you as it has potential.

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Heavy_Space

i liked when he was emotionless but a lot of people did not like it so the author changed it...