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Disclaimer- Harry Potter belongs to J.K Rowling
When everything is over that only mean a new beginning, a small change can save a family and reveal the true world like it is. All that you learn can change for ever if you dare to question if is really good.
Updates on monday, thursday and sunday.
This novel will be not dropped. At most will be a small delay but be sure more chapters will come in compensation.
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This story line is a new look at the Harry Potter world. I like the story line, it something new and it’s giving a new area for us to explore. Overall well written so far, very few typos, the grammar is good. I’ve read to chapter 10 so far. I think the plot line will give a new look at thing that were not really talked about in the story. Hope you keep writing.
i must say that i'm impressed with this work it got me out of my sleep and reading non stop till the last chap(39) please dont drop its rare to read something so good with good background story these days <3
Слишком кардинальные изменения: 1. Дамблдор самый главный злодей и манипулятор. И если в нормальном случае я ничего против не имею, то здесь это вывернуто до абсолюта. 2. Волондеморт лишь марионетка Дамблдора. И опять же ничего против не имею, но считать его лишь посредственным магом странно. 3. СТАТУТ, по сути закон по сокрытию всего магического от обычных людей. Он принят и его придерживаются все волшебники во всём мире, а не только в Британии как здесь. 4. Магические существа, существуют и волшебники успешно скрывают их существование. Они не настолько могущественны чтобы угрожать выживанию человечеству. Зачем преувеличивать их опасность я не знаю.
I both really like this story and really hate this story at the same time. i like it because it’s well put together but I hate it because every chapter feels like a info dump. i just past chapter 20 and it still feels like a prologue, i realize that the author is just trying to expand on the HP universe but there is such a thing as too much information.
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Pretty decent fan fiction. Really enjoyed reading it but struggled with the grammar quality. Could use a little work but its still pretty good either way.
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Looking good. Please update more. Looking good. Please update more. Looking good. Please update more. Looking good. Please update more. Looking good. Please update more.
The description said this will not be dropped yet last update was 3 years ago. The plot is somewhat interesting and the setup is properly progressing but the fic has too many grammar errors. Unfortunately the last chapter before it stopped updating didnt even reach canon timeline
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loveable protagonist and wonderful story development, showing the dark side of the wizarding world and tell the readers it's not all white and black but the grammar need some work even if it's not a trouble to understand.
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This is a really good novel. Good background story, good character development, good writing. This is something new and different from the normal hp fanfics. This go directly to my library. I just only hope that in the future you don't drop this novel.
I really like this fic, I thought it had been abandoned ... and then pff, three new chapters ... I am happy, but in the same way a little apprehensive, there will continue to be new chapters at least once a week or they will pass again months for the next update, I really hope that this fic does not end up being abandoned, in any case, thanks for the title, I love it.
Happy birthday author. Really liking this story. Cant wait to read more.Happy birthday author. Really liking this story. Cant wait to read more.Happy birthday author. Really liking this story. Cant wait to read more.
Really good story. Cant wait to read more. Update more when you can please.Really good story. Cant wait to read more. Update more when you can please.Really good story. Cant wait to read more. Update more when you can please.
Just need to work a little on your grammer😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎More updates plz I really love your novel.😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎