John_Walters_4195

For someone who can't afford a professional editor , you do a great job writing your stories . Every story I have read from you , was well thought out and very engaging.

I hope you can start working on this again .

I enjoy all the stories you have on this site.

I hope you come back and finish the story .

You should add summons from Lotr , the wheel of time series , and even ancient civilizations from earth.

I'm enjoying the story so far . The only critique I have , is I wish the chapters were longer .

please continue this story

this is great so far, please continue this wonderful story

yes make a good harem

please come back to this story . It deserves to be finished