Game of Thrones: King of Magic

1° Don't let it fall, this story has a lot, A LOT of potential. 2° Try to maintain the MC's individuality as a normal person, but without eliminating Solomon's traits. 3° Increase the number of chapters by 10 per week. 7 of which are daily and another 3 according to goals for comments, reviews and Power Stones. 4° I haven't paid attention until now, but if you don't have a Patreon or other form of sponsorship, I strongly recommend that you start finding out about all these details, literally all the details about it. You can earn a good amount of money this way.

A story with good ideas, but extremely much useless filler. Instead of advancing something, every time a chapter is uploaded we only see two words from our protagonist and then leave it in nothing. Trying to lengthen the plot uselessly. I'm tired.

honestly it was good in the start but now it's a chore to read through and not exciting it fell off in the later part where the story just lagged so much .

No hablo ingles y leo esto traducido mediante google pero senti la necesidad de dejar una reseña sobre esta obra. Es increible, tiene una calidad agradable de leer y la escritura al menos en mi idioma es fluida e inmersiva, la historia avanza a buen ritmo y la constucción de personajes me parece bien encaminada. Sin duda esta obra se ha vuelto una de mis favoritas de leer, espero con ansias su continuación.

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The pacing of this story is horrible. On one side you get a 1 Year time jump that skip all the development relationship between MC and the Starks. then MC spends dozens of chapters comprising just a few days on inconsequential side characters that don't matter at all. The plot point of the sons on the Seaford came from nowhere and went, a lot of time wasted that did nothing for character development or plot advancement. Also the MC jumps from place to place without any reason. He went to pentos for Daenerys, and spend like 2 chapters and left her on the hands of some subordinates he summoned off screen . The author's didn't even show the summoning, they just appeared from one chapter to another. Then he bailed out to Bravos to see the house of black and white, we got, like, two chapters on that and the story change focus again and the focus changed to some OCS that no one cares. we are almost 70 chapters in and the Starks just arrived in Kings Landing. This is more like Slices of life of Solomon and less Game of Thrones fanfiction.

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