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Fula_de_tal

The pacing of this story is horrible. On one side you get a 1 Year time jump that skip all the development relationship between MC and the Starks. then MC spends dozens of chapters comprising just a few days on inconsequential side characters that don't matter at all. The plot point of the sons on the Seaford came from nowhere and went, a lot of time wasted that did nothing for character development or plot advancement. Also the MC jumps from place to place without any reason. He went to pentos for Daenerys, and spend like 2 chapters and left her on the hands of some subordinates he summoned off screen . The author's didn't even show the summoning, they just appeared from one chapter to another. Then he bailed out to Bravos to see the house of black and white, we got, like, two chapters on that and the story change focus again and the focus changed to some OCS that no one cares. we are almost 70 chapters in and the Starks just arrived in Kings Landing. This is more like Slices of life of Solomon and less Game of Thrones fanfiction.

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DarkDei

L'histoire etait bien avant que voit le chapitre 25 je decu du choix de l'auteur __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Sir_Leirkazz

Honestly, this story feels like a Patreon bait. It starts strong to hook new readers but later stretches the plot with pointless elements and procrastination. And the worst part? This is a GOT fanfiction with the premise that the MC is a reincarnation of Solomon. Right? Well let's insert later in the story a OC who's going to have more protagonism than Jon Snow and Daenerys, seemingly favored by the author and like in total Sasuke and Bakugou fashion this character is a rude, ENTITLED annoyance!! I wouldn't mind the OC if the author wrote her to be likable, but no... she's just an angsty girl who ruins the moment whenever she opens her useless mouth. Anyways the plot advances like MOLASSES and 4 out of 5 chapter updates are pointless filler.

3mth
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Loaded_Demigod29

Had a lot of potential but MC got sidetracked into interacting with OC characters for some reason and keeps interacting with them for more than half of the fic instead of getting back to the main cast of characters or the main plot which we care about. MC’s pride and sense of self is also non-existent with him just being a self-insert.

3mth
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Mamamesta

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5mth
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novelguru143

honestly it was good in the start but now it's a chore to read through and not exciting it fell off in the later part where the story just lagged so much .

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Kavindu_Ruwanara

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6mth
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NyxOuroboros

A story with good ideas, but extremely much useless filler. Instead of advancing something, every time a chapter is uploaded we only see two words from our protagonist and then leave it in nothing. Trying to lengthen the plot uselessly. I'm tired.

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Asta_4626

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Jackleell

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Mygg4n
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Omega_303

honestly disappointing, the author sticks too much to canon and there is no real progress, the decisions made by the author are questionable and I have no idea where this is going. If you want to read something that sticks to the canon, you better read the original work.

7mth
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Asta_4626

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Jackleell

Keep up the novel—it's one of my favorites so far. But please, do not mess it up for us readers. I also hope you enjoy writing this novel. ___________________

7mth
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AvatarLOK2

A pretty fun fic. Mc is op in an interesting way. I do like how it does not feel preachy at all. I also like how change is being done.

7mth
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RS_1
LV 4 Badge

this is much better than the DXD one in my opinion. the speech dialogue needs better indication though

7mth
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gregm_ayfield

Good stuff interesting template of Solomon, tho I would suggest a little more events in a chapter that are of the same pov. I'm liking the different viewpoints and how they view Solomon

8mth
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Jackleell

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8mth
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PhysX
LV 14 Badge

Story seems ok but hard to read. Its very confusing when someone is talking. If the author stopped using - for speaking the story would improve and be readable. It get worse when someone stutters and its full of - - - - - Every country use "speaking" and 'thinking' in writing. Why some people on webnovel use - for speech i have no clue. Its not something you learn in school.

8mth
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Reincarnated_008

author will there be romance in the fic.

8mth
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unknown_daoist

Bad Grammar + Patreon detected = opinion rejected.

8mth
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Zero_24

Good Job.......................... Good Job.......................... Good Job.......................... Good Job.......................... Good Job.......................... Good Job..........................

8mth
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Jackleell

one of the best GOT fanfic ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

8mth
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Kell_Kewyo

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8mth
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Axaelcito

No hablo ingles y leo esto traducido mediante google pero senti la necesidad de dejar una reseña sobre esta obra. Es increible, tiene una calidad agradable de leer y la escritura al menos en mi idioma es fluida e inmersiva, la historia avanza a buen ritmo y la constucción de personajes me parece bien encaminada. Sin duda esta obra se ha vuelto una de mis favoritas de leer, espero con ansias su continuación.

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8mth
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Febfew
LV 11 Badge

1° Don't let it fall, this story has a lot, A LOT of potential. 2° Try to maintain the MC's individuality as a normal person, but without eliminating Solomon's traits. 3° Increase the number of chapters by 10 per week. 7 of which are daily and another 3 according to goals for comments, reviews and Power Stones. 4° I haven't paid attention until now, but if you don't have a Patreon or other form of sponsorship, I strongly recommend that you start finding out about all these details, literally all the details about it. You can earn a good amount of money this way.

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8mth
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Mathias08

the only problem I have with this novel is the chapters are too short

8mth
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GaryDaSnaiI

Very good fanfiction W author for picking Solomon as mc Plz don’t drop this fic I’m begging 🥺 🙏🏼 First fic I’ve read that used king Solomon as a mc he’s always been my favourite fate character since the Solomon fgo movie Honestly so happy for it because every fate transmigrated mc is always artoria, Shirou or Merlin I don’t think I’ve seen another fic with someone else besides them

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8mth
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Martin_Perrotta

Me gusto [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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8mth
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Fula_de_tal

The pacing of this story is horrible. On one side you get a 1 Year time jump that skip all the development relationship between MC and the Starks. then MC spends dozens of chapters comprising just a few days on inconsequential side characters that don't matter at all. The plot point of the sons on the Seaford came from nowhere and went, a lot of time wasted that did nothing for character development or plot advancement. Also the MC jumps from place to place without any reason. He went to pentos for Daenerys, and spend like 2 chapters and left her on the hands of some subordinates he summoned off screen . The author's didn't even show the summoning, they just appeared from one chapter to another. Then he bailed out to Bravos to see the house of black and white, we got, like, two chapters on that and the story change focus again and the focus changed to some OCS that no one cares. we are almost 70 chapters in and the Starks just arrived in Kings Landing. This is more like Slices of life of Solomon and less Game of Thrones fanfiction.

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1mth
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DarkDei

L'histoire etait bien avant que voit le chapitre 25 je decu du choix de l'auteur __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

1mth
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Sir_Leirkazz

Honestly, this story feels like a Patreon bait. It starts strong to hook new readers but later stretches the plot with pointless elements and procrastination. And the worst part? This is a GOT fanfiction with the premise that the MC is a reincarnation of Solomon. Right? Well let's insert later in the story a OC who's going to have more protagonism than Jon Snow and Daenerys, seemingly favored by the author and like in total Sasuke and Bakugou fashion this character is a rude, ENTITLED annoyance!! I wouldn't mind the OC if the author wrote her to be likable, but no... she's just an angsty girl who ruins the moment whenever she opens her useless mouth. Anyways the plot advances like MOLASSES and 4 out of 5 chapter updates are pointless filler.

3mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Loaded_Demigod29

Had a lot of potential but MC got sidetracked into interacting with OC characters for some reason and keeps interacting with them for more than half of the fic instead of getting back to the main cast of characters or the main plot which we care about. MC’s pride and sense of self is also non-existent with him just being a self-insert.

3mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Mamamesta

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz[img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

5mth
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novelguru143

honestly it was good in the start but now it's a chore to read through and not exciting it fell off in the later part where the story just lagged so much .

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6mth
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Kavindu_Ruwanara

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6mth
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NyxOuroboros

A story with good ideas, but extremely much useless filler. Instead of advancing something, every time a chapter is uploaded we only see two words from our protagonist and then leave it in nothing. Trying to lengthen the plot uselessly. I'm tired.

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6mth
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Asta_4626

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7mth
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Jackleell

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7mth
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Mygg4n
LV 12 Badge

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7mth
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Omega_303

honestly disappointing, the author sticks too much to canon and there is no real progress, the decisions made by the author are questionable and I have no idea where this is going. If you want to read something that sticks to the canon, you better read the original work.

7mth
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Asta_4626

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] good novel

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7mth
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Jackleell

Keep up the novel—it's one of my favorites so far. But please, do not mess it up for us readers. I also hope you enjoy writing this novel. ___________________

7mth
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AvatarLOK2

A pretty fun fic. Mc is op in an interesting way. I do like how it does not feel preachy at all. I also like how change is being done.

7mth
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RS_1
LV 4 Badge

this is much better than the DXD one in my opinion. the speech dialogue needs better indication though

7mth
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gregm_ayfield

Good stuff interesting template of Solomon, tho I would suggest a little more events in a chapter that are of the same pov. I'm liking the different viewpoints and how they view Solomon

8mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Jackleell

nice [img=update][img=update] nice [img=update][img=update]nice [img=update][img=update]nice [img=update][img=update]nice [img=update][img=update]nice [img=update][img=update]

8mth
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PhysX
LV 14 Badge

Story seems ok but hard to read. Its very confusing when someone is talking. If the author stopped using - for speaking the story would improve and be readable. It get worse when someone stutters and its full of - - - - - Every country use "speaking" and 'thinking' in writing. Why some people on webnovel use - for speech i have no clue. Its not something you learn in school.

8mth
Xem 3 lời trả lời
Reincarnated_008

author will there be romance in the fic.

8mth
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unknown_daoist

Bad Grammar + Patreon detected = opinion rejected.

8mth
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Zero_24

Good Job.......................... Good Job.......................... Good Job.......................... Good Job.......................... Good Job.......................... Good Job..........................

8mth
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Jackleell

one of the best GOT fanfic ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

8mth
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Kell_Kewyo

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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8mth
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Axaelcito

No hablo ingles y leo esto traducido mediante google pero senti la necesidad de dejar una reseña sobre esta obra. Es increible, tiene una calidad agradable de leer y la escritura al menos en mi idioma es fluida e inmersiva, la historia avanza a buen ritmo y la constucción de personajes me parece bien encaminada. Sin duda esta obra se ha vuelto una de mis favoritas de leer, espero con ansias su continuación.

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8mth
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Febfew
LV 11 Badge

1° Don't let it fall, this story has a lot, A LOT of potential. 2° Try to maintain the MC's individuality as a normal person, but without eliminating Solomon's traits. 3° Increase the number of chapters by 10 per week. 7 of which are daily and another 3 according to goals for comments, reviews and Power Stones. 4° I haven't paid attention until now, but if you don't have a Patreon or other form of sponsorship, I strongly recommend that you start finding out about all these details, literally all the details about it. You can earn a good amount of money this way.

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8mth
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Mathias08

the only problem I have with this novel is the chapters are too short

8mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
GaryDaSnaiI

Very good fanfiction W author for picking Solomon as mc Plz don’t drop this fic I’m begging 🥺 🙏🏼 First fic I’ve read that used king Solomon as a mc he’s always been my favourite fate character since the Solomon fgo movie Honestly so happy for it because every fate transmigrated mc is always artoria, Shirou or Merlin I don’t think I’ve seen another fic with someone else besides them

img
8mth
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Martin_Perrotta

Me gusto [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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