DRoppppppppppeed

LV 14

Gilgamos

It still stupid and makes no sense why would they put him in a time dialation when they could literally put him in man’s world in an orphanage but you want to skip to where Batman and superman are currently heroes

LV 4

iModex

I Don't get it he had 5000 years he should be able to study magic and other stuff and other stuff, and if someone imprisoned me for 5000 years i would want to eat him alive , and then what he do? Nothing. And when someone mention his sister he acts like a siscon for a person he literally never met. I mean i really want to see him kill their entire island

LV 3

DupryCharzard876

Man, so far, this isn't even a rewrite it is just a reposting with a different name

LV 5

GRAVITY

I don't like it, too unrealistic for 5000 years of isolation. .

LV 14

DaoistDark

This one is really rough. I was excited when the re write was announced but this just fees like the Same story with a few tweaks. The main issues with the initial story was a lack of character devlopment and a messy plot. The premise of the story is just frankly not great. The mc being a reincarnater makes character devlopment much harder and the whole time dilation thing is just boring. The mc should have been killed or tossed out when he was born. just picture this, the mc is killed is an infant and is then sent to the underworld to be judged and seeing his lineage hades desides to take him in whether that’s for revenge against Zeus or something else. The story would work much better in terms of character devlopment as well. A big part of the original was wonder women coming to terms with the fact that her mother locked up her brother for thousands of years. Now imagine her reaction when she finds out that her mother murdered her infant little brother. You can even make a plot point where her mother seals Diana’s memories of him and that blowing up later. TLDR: Boring with a metric ton of potential.

LV 14

NotSoBigShlong

Author definitely didn’t put thought into how someone would feel being trapped for 5,000 years. He can hold strong and normal conversation with others even remembering small details like fireworks and celebrations for birthdays. After that long you wouldn’t have any normal brain functions and would be like an empty shell with no remnants of former personality. Also, this 5,000 year time skip was clearly a lazy way of implementing the mc in a time where common knowledge of DC is available. Didn’t put any effort into thinking what he could do with 5,000 years time before Batman and what not. Not a rewrite at all also.

LV 4

Aaron_Vittore

ok so many issues. 1 the wishes 2 the big as s plot holes 3 a retards the size of the sun as a Mc 4 there isn't any satisfaction pay off any of the plot threads 5 and up is for anything some one else can come up with.

LV 11

SoulessReaper

still utter trash only difference is grammar ................................................................................................................

LV 13

antmanFN

like everyone else is repeatedly telling the arthur you have the biggest plot whole right at the star and you didnt even change it the only thing u changed was his weapon and the fight scene is still unrealitic

LV 5

D1vineMonarch

dude don't you read the comics? The Amazons have male and female children, the women she raises to be Amazons and the men she throws to Hephaestus.

LV 4

GodKaiser

Nothing to add, the first reviews say it all

LV 4

super_size_satan

He wouldn't be an Amazon, he would be a Gargarean.

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Neriah_Zebulon

is this a rewrite????????????????????????????????????????

LV 10

Axmeer

Do read Dc comics if you did even a little research you would come to know that there are mail Amazonians but the mother either kill the males or sell the children to slavery

LV 5

carrotpie

I read this before on Wattpad it’s a copy

LV 4

The_Eldritch_Troll

I've definitely read and am not just feeding the flames to this authors depression.

LV 3

Uz_Sa

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LV 14

ridokou_naruto

because i am Bias and i like the First Male Amazon Story Author-Sama

LV 4

Genesis_YT

im just gonna be a nerd here and provide a fact that there have been many male amazons they are just shipped off to become slaves(thats what they think)/sons(what they actually are) to hephaestus

LV 2

SomethingMalefic

feels like an mtl, it probably is. also its trash, did I say that already?