/ Realistic / Discontinued Novel: Fighting In A New Age
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"I've killed to many people in pursuit of power and success in the other world to return to my own a failure"
Gyun Sung who was the greatest Kendo prodigy of all time, won the world championship at just 17. Transmigrated to Murim where he spent 7 years of his life fighting and building his own power. He reached the culmination of martial arts the Martial God stage, underwent body modification perfecting his body for martial arts, and established the most ruthless and strongest mercenary corp in all of murim the Raven Black mercenary corp. He returned to his world after dying against the combined efforts of the three murim faction leaders who destroyed everything, his reputation, his friends using money and killed him after weakening him by paying of a trusted advisor to poison him. Gyun returns to his world, his qi is gone but his experiences and martial arts. He swears to himself that money will never be a problem, he will use the only things left over from his life in Murim his perfected body that has superhuman strength and speed, his techniques and the will and determination of someone who’s lived a decade fighting a hairsbreadth from death.
Authors note : I will aim for one chapter a day , sometimes maybe I will write 2 or 3 depending upon how much time I have. There may be mistakes since most chapters are written in an hour based off an idea I thought of while at school. During weekends there will definitely be 2 chapters a week, and I will make sure that every chapter has at minimum 1,000 words to a maximum of 2,000. Please tell me in comments if there are any mistakes. Also if you recommend any story ideas I might implement them.
Either way thanks for reading!
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Viết đánh giáThe writing is a bit weirdly worded and put together, same goes for the dialogue which is blocky and is a bit rough, but the story is interesting if a bit rushed. The world seems to have a lot of unexplored areas that are hinted at. Characters are decent and have some of their quirks but a bit stale overall, and the female characters aren't particularly interesting. Honestly I would've dropped this if it weren't for the quality difference between the first and most recent chapters, where it is noticeable that the author is improving and also the author updates daily which is a plus. Overall not amazing like something you'd read for entertainment on the weekend but something you'd read if you were bored its more of a munchkin novel, maybe it gets better IDK maybe I'll update this depending upon either way its a decent novel though rocky in the beginning
Tác giả ForerunnerOfSky
I normally give lesser rating but this ....unbelievable it's incredibly interesting...remind me of this chinese series Legend of the ancient sword . All in all its a 10/10[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]