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Alex Smith and his twin Evan, Children of a Primordial God and a Cultivator, travels the world befriending Demigods and superheroes. Will they become the Thanos or be the Universe's Salvation?
Note: If you find this similar to any other novels, I will just say I have read most of them and decided to make my own with some of their ideas here and there.
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Hes supposed to be a demigod cultivator but doesnt use any cultivation techniques or demigod powers all he uses is technology/guns/missles/bombs. seems like hes just a rip off version of ionman why make him a demigod and cultivator should of just mad him a reqular human - reviewed at chapter 13
why would they be in camp tho ? They don't need protection, they don't need training. They can get both from their parents (or just mother) and more and they did for years. Just bullshit to force plot. Dropped
I honestly tried to read this fanfic, but I just couldn't. I love the idea of a cultivator in MCU / Percy Jackson, but this fanfic is just not good. The chapters are incredibly short and the story incredibly hurried. The story is so rushed that there is no room for any Story Development, Character Design and world background. If you do not know any of the works that appear in this fanfic you can forget to understand anything related to it. To make matters worse, cultivation sucks, instead of making the perci Jackson characters stronger, or simply letting the mc progress slowly, the author chose to greatly nerf the cultivators' power. A cultivator needs to be from the nascent soul level to become immune to grenades and a tribulation level to resist the machine gun. Finally, the MC doesn't look like a cultivator, I don't even know if he went through a tribulation because of the timeskip and the fights so short that it would be better to just skip them.
Has a lot of potential, my advice to the author would be to read similar story's of cultivators reincarnating/transmigrating/returning on a modern planet to get a feel for the flow of the story and increase your skillset in this particular genre.
MEH give myself a Review but not totally biased. First two chapters are kinda meh not at all exciting but it gets better in chap 4 and 5. I already have an idea of what I'm gonna do to the charaters, Don't worry I'm going to try and do my best to do better for the rest of the following chapters tho. World background is like what the tittle states, Marvel Universe plus Eastern Fantasy and Greek Gods(Percy Jackson). I'll subtract a star from writing quality since my first two chapters sucked.
I really don't need to say anything else, I don't care if the story is a harem or not, I LOVE IT!!!!!! Thanks for the chapters, and the wonderful story.
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so here we start okay, to be honest I haven't read this novel but from this title it's definitely interesting so don't disappoint the reader okay and don't HIATUS / drop this novel ok ?, so my suggestion is that the author needs to go crazy up chapters and lengthen words in 1 chapter if it can't be long, at most, make it 2 chapters per day so readers will be happy and will give you support so that's all, well, don't drop it okay! hah ... the important thing is to keep the spirit in making this novel goodbye!
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I gave it a total of 3 stars based on all other reviews, and I also want to see if it will have an official rating as this is the 10th review.
Updated review on the story :P I'd say that the book is not perfect, It still needs some improvement and as I go further in I will try to develop the storyline. Small Harem story with 4 ladies at most. I made the MC scared of his wives but he will grow from his fear. World Background is exactly as the title states and with a bit of transformers here and there. First couple chapters are short and terrible. Writing quality gets better later on but, I would have some mistakes here and there so I would give an excuse for it later on to salvage whatever I could. :)