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Date A Live: Starting as Acheron
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This is an original story.
Synopsis:
My name is Erick, and I can't say I know what I'm doing here. But those skimpy mecha suits in the distance sure are interesting. Hold on. Spacequakes? CR-units? And this blade strapped to my side... isn't this Acheron's [Naught] blade???
Westcott: Spirit [IX] is an important research subject. We must capture him at all costs!
Ratatoskr: [IX]'s Reiryoku readings are catastrophically high. We must seal him at any cost!
Shido: I promise I'll save you, no matter what!
Kyo (Erick): Buzz off, I'm not dating a man!
Author's Note:
If you couldn't tell, I enjoy reading MTL novels. But rest assured, I will do my best to uphold proper grammar and spelling. I'm not promising anything regarding an update schedule though. Thanks for reading this first fanfic of mine.
Disclaimer: Date a Live was created by Kōshi Tachibana, and Honkai Star Rail was created by Hoyoverse. As such, I do not own any of their characters in this fic.
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Really well made FF, the writing quality is definitely one of the best in the FF category. It feels like… well, an actual book unlike the other brainrot english that’s on this app. Good OC, honestly surprised at how well you made Acheron fit in the [Date A Live] world. I will be honest thou, upload is kinda slow… but the writing quality makes up for it. (I’d rather have slow uploads with good writing then brainrot everyday) +No Harem Overall I give you a cooki for you good work, ty.
As of now I have no problem with this fanfic, it has the same essence as an machine translation but without the bad stuff. Also this is just a personal pet peeve I have with some fanfic is that they just follow the plot but with there oc, without changing anything. Some of my favorite fanfic are ones that change the plot in interesting ways. As of now I think this fanfic is heading in the right direction, please continue cooking author.
Sinceramente me esta gustando hasta ahora. No hay tantos capitulos como para juzgarlo mejor pero me gusta. 💥💥💥🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫😐😐😐😐😐😐
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I don’t really do reviews, so I’ll try to make this brief. Essentially, the author does a pretty decent job at creating funny moments, serious moments and wholesome moments. The characters feel pretty fleshed out too.
I suppose it's customary for an author to give their own fanfic nothing but the highest praise, so here we are. While I'm at it, I guess I'll make a few things clear. 1. I have chosen to make my MC male, and there will be no harem. 2. I will try to recreate characters to the best of my ability, but please be understanding if I mess someone up. 3. I will be adding a bit of my own canon in order to explain the existence of my ol' MC. Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy.