Bleach Soul Blast

LV 3

XIANJING

actually this is quite good and simple, but why are many confused, this proves that most fanfic webnovel readers are still underage or are still children. or they're just dumb, this is way better than another fanfic called Protagonist Killer

LV 13

AnRa

The idea of the story is interesting, but i think you rushed a bit too much in the flashback chapter, the relationship between each character is a bit awkward because of it, for example the MC is mad when the hollow ate his vice captain, bc we don't know what the MC feel about his VC, it's a bit too forced, the same thing happened with the captain commander. In my opinion you can probably explain about his past in the first and second volume, or maybe explain his third life with ichigo a bit more and make his past with yoruichi more mysterious. *Sorry if there something wrong with what i wrote, english isn't my first language. Thx

LV 5

Lordmoonlight

won't like needs an editor story got lot of potential I was confused by the way you change it from modern day when hes classmate of the original bleach cast and then hes a reincarnated person who died again I think after he was an op captain

LV 3

SHURA

The first 50 chapters were very entertaining and interesting, however after the reincarnation event everything goes downhill, useless scenes and fillers that practically do not add anything to the story, the protagonist becomes stupid, let alone the scenes Most recent forced

LV 14

nacht

it's confusing when reading this fanfic because when I read until chapter 7 i feel like there is no explanation what is mc is, what is mc goal, where this story going, why mc memory change when he killed by hollow of inoue older brother, and etc

LV 1

Exargna

To be honest, this fan fiction is below average. Before that, it was more or less average, but after the crossover with DxD began and the harem appeared, everything went downhill. All female characters fall in love with the main character because of a banal flirtation... The whole world indulges the desires of the hero, most of the characters are simple NPCs... The main character is an ordinary Gary Stew. That's probably all. Arrivederci.

LV 4

Pointles

wow just wow this is truly amazing ..................................................................................................

LV 4

Toxic_318

Well, I'd say this novel was average. Confusing start with the world background not being stated clearly. Below average usage of grammar and annoying mistakes in writing that grates on your nerves. In my opinion, this novel deserves about 2 stars rating at most. I'm seeing that most of the reviews are 5 star spams. Don't read this fanfic. The ratings are fake.

LV 6

FAP_Master_

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LV 7

kobeblackmamba

For the bankai I have a idea , He create a water zone like kisame fusion with samehada , but the difference is he became water so he can attack the enemy from every where, he can detect every source of water inside this water zone si aizen Perfect illusion don't work on him, and like kisame the zone move with him , I think it would be OP but it would made sense with his shikai For the bankai I have a idea , He create a water zone like kisame fusion with samehada , but the difference is he became water so he can attack the enemy from every where, he can detect every source of water inside this water zone si aizen Perfect illusion don't work on him, and like kisame the zone move with him , I think it would be OP but it would made sense with his shikai

LV 2

arata_red

i am a fanatic of bleach. from what i can see here is this fanfic does not follow the bleach timeline. For example, the author states that Aizen is already a captain but Ichimaru gin have not become a shinigami yet. Based on the manga and the anime when Ichimaru Gin graduate from the academy and officially becomes a shinigami under Aizen. At that time Aizen is only a 5th seat in the squad/division. that the author does not have a good understanding about bleach OR the author is not an fluent in english. the author made the mistake of representing the Gotei squad/division as : Gotei 1 = first division, Gotei 2= second division, Gotei 3 =third division, Gotei 13 = 13th division.( THIS IS WRONG ) CORRECTION IS: Gotei 13 == ( means ALL division or squad from 1st-->13th division ) WQ = 3, >> needs more improvement. SoU= 3, SD= 3, >>many forced plot hole as SD. CD= 2,>> little to no self monologue/struggle as a transmigrator. WB=1,>>many wrong facts about bleach timeline and characters SHOULD be address as butterfly effects. Overall 2.4 stars. from start to finnish I dont feel like the MC is awed by being in the bleach's multiverse. There's no description in terms of scaling there is no writing to entice reader's excitement, fear probably it is like. arrived in bleach>>flirt at all women>>OP in academy>>...so on the lackluster part is theres no inner struggle/realistic person point of view to engage reader in the experience. normal human behavior that readers can relate to is "hesitation","fear","dissapointed", "hopefull", "facing the unknown" for example when trying to impress Yoruichi for the first time there should be internal struggle like frozen(hesitation) as if time had pause/slow motion while your thoughts are on overdrive hence came the idea of flower as gift ......l (inner struggle) but how am I even strong enough to shunpo and get things done in this timeframe? .... if there no system to help then just say something burst in MC soul like gundam seed suddenly acting on impulse or something OR Mc only realize everything after the act is completed while a few beads of sweat coming up with the idea on how to cover up the action with a few cringy lines to flirt would be better. that would be more engaging to readers.

LV 1

The_Unending_Lord

Trash, MC has 0 personality other than being a playboy, women fall for him after a few sentences, English that seems like it was written by a 12 or 13 year old who was failing in English class and original characters who didn't act like how they were depicted in bleach 3/10 2 for the interesting original concept, 1 for being able to write 100+ ch

LV 7

Melshan

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escobe

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escobe

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escobe

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escobe

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escobe

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LV 12

escobe

This is a good fanfic for those who understand. many are confused by the storyline, it is recommended for those of you who are confused to read it twice or more to understand the story, because this fanfic has a storyline that is rarely used by other fanfic writers, namely forward storyline and backward storyline. where almost all other fanfic writers only use one storyline, namely the advanced storyline.