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Bleach: Starting as a Vasto Lorde
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Short version: A guy gets yeeted into the Bleach World as a Vasto Lorde Hollow. Oh, and he also has a system.
Long version: In a world where Kazuya felt trapped, he longed for a life of freedom. When he wakes up in the strange land of Hueco Mundo, he's determined to make the most of this new chance. But things won't be easy with the villainous Aizen Sōsuke wanting to control Hueco Mundo for his own dark purposes.
With powerful Vasto Lorde-Class abilities and a strong System, Kazuya must find his way through the tough world of Bleach, making friends and fighting enemies to keep his freedom. As challenges rise and danger grows, can Kazuya's strong will and determination help him break free from control and come out on top?
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It's the Glorious Milfhunter, the man among men who never forgets a single woman.
Great story. Thoroughly enjoyed it up until the author decided to give the MC the ability to change his race from hollow to shinigami and Quincy and everything else. Didn’t start reading the story for that, so won’t be sticking around. Considering the story is titled “Starting as a Vastol Lorde” I should’ve know something like this would happen.
Mc as hollow? Will he forgot to regenerate too? That fanfiction still haunt me as author nerfing the mc so much that there no sense of what happened.
I have the pleasure to have somewhat participated in the earlier part of the creation. This is a story done by a good author who made great research about Bleach to better understand it and bring us a story from a different perspective. I am sure you guys will love it.
I have read up until chapter 104, For me the story is good but I have some notes. 1- Lack of fights, The Mc spawns already powerful but he doesn't get into serious fights that often ( The only serious fight is with barragan) but I kinda understand this since with his power it's hard to find powerful opponent until he waits for the canon to start ( he's born 50 years before canon) 2-His harem, His harem is actually well wrote and have actual developments but from what I see his women serve no purpose to that story other than being a romantic interest or for funny moments ( Apart from the shark lady they are all fodders and follow MC'S desicions) 3-Slow pace which isn't a huge problem but 99% of the chapters are about his harem without any developments of the story outside it. 4- His myestries , A lot of things about the MC are left unexplained, like his system or his zanbakuto which is good but with 100 chapters down the line without any explaination is not a good thing in my opinion. The only thing that will make the story better in my opinion is to lessen the attention on the women outside or inside his harem, And focus on the MC, like his plans or strength or the development in general and explain his power and their nature and have him engage in actual fights. With the pace we are going with I'd say canon will start in chapter 200
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Yay.New story!! ...........................................................................................................................................
Это пиздец, так испоганить канон, просто нет слов. Да еще и гарем. Отвратительная работа молаоаашмалаллаоаггшашашаоааоаоагагагвгвоооагсгаггввггвгаагмгм
Simply GLORIOUS! As one would expect from this author. He writes good, so that's to be expected. I just finished reading the first few chapters and I have to say, from the very first page, I was hooked. The characters read so real and well-developed even from the start, that I felt like I knew them personally, and the storyline was so captivating that I couldn't put the book down. Don't forget to give it a try and stick around!
I loved the story, its well written no obvious grammar error and anything negative. Only problems i faced reading this is knowing he wont be a hollow forever, so i dropped it. But that doesnt mean just cus i hated the idea ill give it megative star review i only made this reviw to ask: Will he still have his hollow counterpart when he turns to dif race like shinigami/quincy? Will be be part hollow part shinigami part quinc like ichigo?
Love the pacing pretty Interesting he just doesn’t make girls fall in love out of where the relationships and bonds are built over time which then comes lemons which are peak 😗grammar is good so need for your brain cells to be fried even 2 seconds ( welcome back my man you have been missed )
To be honest, the story falls in nearly the same mistakes as Bleach. MC is ridiculously strong, so he uses very few techniques. It is a harem story with a slightly aloof character (he gets involved with his girls, but not that deeply). The world background is quite soid, but that's all
Well... if only he had kept his Hollow form, then I would stay, sadly he didn't, so it's a pleasure to have followed this but I'm leaving now. PS: I would have put the title [Limited time slot xd]
This is amazing, I can tell this is gonna go far if you keep up the work. This is great great great. ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ………………………
Simply phenomenal. The story has been thought out so well that I am in awe. The characters are so fleshed out that they feel real. The grammar is so grammatically correct I feel inspired. GLORIOUS.
Biased but hey, GMilfHunter is the best when it comes to harems. Not much to say since there's little to no chapter, gonna wait and let em to pile up first then will edit the review. Hopefully Cliche Multiverse Story's updates will not slow down.
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Dommage que des erreurs totalement évitable du protagoniste soit utilisé pour créer des situation compliquée, c’est une facilité de scénario de rendre des personnages momentanément moins réfléchies
HEY AUTHOR , I AM ASKING TO UPLOAD NEW CHAPTERS IN " A CLICHÉ MULTIVERSE STORY " OR IF YOUR'RE NOT WANT TO CONTINUE JUST FINISH IT IN 10 - 15 CHAPTERS MORE SO IT HAS AN ENDING OR YOU WILL DO CONTINUE THE NOVEL" A CLICHÉ MULTIVERSE STORY " IN FUTURE.YOUR'RE ALREADY DOING ANOTHER NOVEL, SO JUST FINISH THE NOVEL " A CLICHÉ MULTIVERSE STORY" SO WE WILL GET SOME PIECE AND ENTERTAINMENT .
It’s nice to see someone finally choosing vasto lorde like me. Now I’m not alone here.
Well, most bleach fics are dropped, so I decided to write my own. The story is set 50+ years before the main story of Bleach. Also Nel is best girl :3