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35 year old mercenary named Jack died and get reincarnated in BLACK CLOVER as Asta with small wishes.....Asta will be more strong, smart and wise unlike original...
this is my first novel so try to co-operate....
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Nice story buddy, seriously i have read some black clover fanfic but most are like asta x yuno or oc x asta, finally some nice stuff for cultural man like us . Yes, starting 3-4 chapters are pretty short but it’s all right, from than onwards author have done nice comeback with long chapters so 😎👍🏻 from me ....
Hello there , shameless author here giving his work full stars , Well I’ll keep it short I really wanted to write novel for long time but as a collage student you never get enough time , now that I’m I’ll take this novel to the end I don’t like idea of dropping my work which I start from so many planning... so stay tune and keep reading.....
I like it, the MC is not stupidly overpower( not yet anyway) but can still hand most people their azz, the MC is also at least sensible unlike the original Asta( I don't dislike Asta but it's can be kinda weird sometime). I hope the author just leave it at Haki+ swordsmanship and his anti magic without any devil fruit power come into the equation, it would be too one piece then. I look forward to the MC fight against the devils and the dark triad, thank for your hard-work, author.
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One of the best Black Clover fiction. I like your idea about his power, having haki and all with Anti-magic is nice combo .. Just continue with your current work.... 👍🏻👍🏻😍😍📝
Its interesting but chps are short...like really short.................. suggestion: MC better be atleast captain level at minimum by the start of cannon cause his wish....make MC smart and OP, not a perverted idiot....add some romance and fluff...just build it...no ****ty shallow romance, anyway GL
Don’t be fooled with 5-stars reviews. There’re some grammar mistakes, which are really annoying, like he don’t, he plan and etc. The story has just started and so far, it’s been updating constantly. There’re some time-skips, but they’re rushed. Character design is awful: if you don’t know Black clover, you will be struggling, because the author doesn’t describe them properly. World background is ****ty: just a copy paste chapter before the story. I wouldn’t recommend you this novel.
Nice development for Asta . I really hated original asta . But you really have made his excellent... I like the way you improve many things from original.. Well i no idea what to comment next . Keep going and continue 😍👍🏻
I'm not a big fan of black clover at all, but that's good ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope you can continue to write, great job, thanks for updates keep up, more chapters and new powers thanks very much for your hard working
one of the greatest fanfiction ever well if you ever happen to continue I'll be a daily reader of this story. if you ever happen to stumble upon this comment, please continue. And thank you bro,I really had a good time reading this story. And again thank you for everything.👍👍👍😁
one of the best fanfiction I've read thus far.and the story is fantastic in all way. The MC is super smart,op and super handsome and all of this makes the story a marvelous display of creativity. please make more chapters.
HOPE THE AUTHOR WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
I am the soul of my account Exp is my body and coin is my blood I have created countless reviews Unaware of the congruity, Nor aware of the quality Withstood critics to create reviews, waiting for one's acceptance I have no shame. This is the easiest way My whole life was Unlimited Useless Previews
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it's a great story you make. you make asta more baddas with the way you give him a skill which he can to send a sowrd slash with the anti magic. so it's give him more chance to be more volatile in the fighting an opponent
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This story has a great potential.... You have done fine charachar development. Just keep working hard without listening to any haters. I look forward to more chapters